Renascence

It’s All in How You Look At Things

Deep pink
covering all
saturated
clinging together
in your wetness
a glimpse at what was
a precursor of what will be
a blessing
the sign of a new beginning
the promise of tomorrow –
yet, your final going
washed down
by heavy waters
is an ending
something lost forever
Death.


Deep pink
covering all
saturated
clinging together
in your wetness
a glimpse at what was
your final going
washed down
by heavy waters
is an ending
something lost forever –
yet, a precursor of what will be
a blessing
the sign of a new beginning
the promise of tomorrow
Life.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
A reflection on blossoms and...

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agoodguy2have
good title GNJ for today. A good balance and a wonderful word to express all that this day means to many. Interesting how "scence" kind of fits / plays the flower rebirth and scents. ;-)
BeneathePines
gnj; nice work, 'likeit twice ~: )
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Yes, this is my Easter poem and I am pleased you liked the title. Thank you for your comments.
gnj4u
Hi, BeneathePines,
Thank you for reading my poem and liking it - twice!
jazzy75
gnj4u - well written...love the contrastsapplause
gnj4u
Hi, Jazzy,
Thank you for reading. I am pleased that you enjoyed the contrasts! Attitude may not be everything, but it certainly matters.
hedistuff
interesting...thank you....though I bet that you can take this approach a lot deeper and a lot further. I was taken by this. may copycat when I get smarter.
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
I'm glad you found my poem interesting and thank you for your comments. In reaction to the scene, my mind was going in multiple directions, resulting in this poem. I am hoping that each reader will discover many levels of meanings within the poem.
NeverEndingStory
Wow! Clever. The poem too ^_^ It was beautiful TY teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, NeverEndingStory,
I am so happy that you found my poem beautiful. Thank you for your generous compliment.
gnj4u
Hi, EarlGreyTea,
I always appreciate your comments! Some say that, in order to interpret a poem, one needs to understand the history surrounding the poet. Although there is perhaps some truth to that, I do not view anyone's poem as being limited by that history. Hopefully, a poem's meaning transcends the immediate impetus to write it, with each unique reader discovering (or creating) meaning, or not, during the reading process.
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