Mandolins

Mandolins, guitars
bongo drums,
mixed with voices,
produce harmony
pleasing to the ear.
Blues, country, folk-rock
slide one into the other.
Bodies move to the beat
of night-defining rhythm.

In the midst of sound,
lives join together.
Joyful voices mix in
friendly exchanges.
Glasses clink one another
then the table
before lifted again
in celebration of life
and connectedness.

Voices dart out
and strike the air, then
blend into background
enveloped in smoke and music –
unlike Pi going on forever
never repeating, always original
challenging the mind
Balanchine discord strikes nerves
until a pattern emerges.

After you depart
I sit alone and wait
for the music to begin again
in the room, in my heart.
If I wait long enough, it will.
So, I wait and listen and be,
With half-empty tables,
music fills the night and
bodies sway in summer’s heat.
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Posted: Apr 2010

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Happygolucky4uonline today!
Your poem reeled with harmony. Excitement and then foreboding. Thank you I could picture the place in my mind. bouquet
agoodguy2have
great evocative words gnj. I could hear the clinking and laughter. 1 question, did Balanchine strike discord, was he an impossible task master? The party (& music) will rejuvenate soon I think.
Earlgreytea
"After you depart I sit alone and wait for the music to begin again in the room, in my heart" i said before and say again, what talent! thank you, for dousing our grey matter with some of your inner beauty...
boyshchrm6
Lovely well described event. I'm sure
I could hear music. Wonderfully done!!applause head banger wine
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
Thank you for reading and hearing the music. Words making music...perhaps Balanchine would approve. Let the dancing begin!
NeverEndingStory
Everything they said, beautifully done cheering dancing cheers teddybear
paloma66
Musical masterpiece of words....thank you for the music your poem brought.thumbs up bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet bouquet
ChenoaSW
oh gosh...you got me good with this one lol.
I have tears roll eyes lol.So wonderful how you moved me with your words and image magic!!

"After you depart
I sit alone and wait
for the music to begin again
in the room, in my heart.
If I wait long enough, it will."

cheering

EXCELLENT lines filled with so much feeling!

Thank you...and also...many thanks for your kind words on my writing teddybear
jazzy75
gnj4u - the mandolins continue to play for me...this is a wonderful work of art! just love your 'be'ing in the end...so much said here :) thanks my friendhug cheers
gnj4u
Hi, NeverEndingStory, paloma66, ChenoaSW, and jazzy75,
I am happy that my poem spoke and/or sang to each of you. Thank you for your kind words. They strike a note in my heart.
CelticPoet12
Hey girl, interesting piece. I loved the work as a whole, but this really hit me for some reason:
Voices dart out
and strike the air, then
blend into background
enveloped in smoke and music –

I just love how you captured this and gave me much to think about, just those lines alone. This piece conjures images and made my mind savor the words. Thanks!~wine
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