Cogs of grey membrane turning endlessly Clutching memories slipping as if pulled by gravity Endless thoughts and random theories Midnight frantic dillusions and colourless visions Stoic face or feigned smiles of fake platitutes Dreary gloom set over a now vacant and debauched moon Kiss her hard and pretend to swoon, words rehearsed to make her believe the absurd Coerced emotions injected and fabricated and left to bake Words of affection carefully crafted to prevent rejection What a strange, paradoxical and theatrical production love is. Out, out damn honesty. Rehearse the script. Tis not real, but is what it is ...the thespian wins and the honest fool partakes of naught, then becomes the understudy to learn the craft.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Honesty..Smonesty...tell them what they want to hear...lol.
Tell them what they want to hear, is reality because if we were all honest with each other lots Of us would be very upset at each other. Very nice poem! I am being honest.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusApr 21, 2010
Nice read, Canada...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 21, 2010
Boyshchrm, Nice poem. I like the honesty. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
Well Mychelle I not only think you have to bend the truth but be deceiptfull. I don't like that idea, but it seems to be what woman want to hear. (Unfortuneately) Truth is stanger than fiction and most often rejected by woman where a contrived lie is believed...what can I say more. Thanks for your comment...
really like this, it's true you can convince someone if you say it enough - but only briefly, then reality cuts in, thanks for sharing these thoughts..
Hi, boyshchrm6, Interesting concept. Yet, without honesty, there is no reality. Without reality, there is no love - only illusions. Clutching memories slipping as if pulled by gravity captured me. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Gnj4u for your input. Well theres pros and cons for everything. I just get dissillusioned with the truth sometimes I guess. Best to live in an alternate Reality.
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a good work..
I like these lines very much..
"Words of affection carefully crafted to prevent rejection"
thanks for share...
SABEEL.
it like it is...doh!
have your opinion and approval
on this poem Andrew. Thanks.
fat..the guy at the serger was tripping
on acid and cut them wrong...
gotta do is get rid of that Goodguy image...lol.
-honesty+arrogance=success (boolean algebra I believe)
liked my writing.
Of us would be very upset at each other. Very nice poem! I am being honest.
Nice poem. I like the honesty. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
truth but be deceiptfull. I don't like that idea, but
it seems to be what woman want to hear. (Unfortuneately)
Truth is stanger than fiction and most often rejected by
woman where a contrived lie is believed...what can I say more.
Thanks for your comment...
Appreciate comment.
like the honesty....lol.
on a huge stage. Thanks for
your insightful comments.
thanks for sharing these thoughts..
Interesting concept. Yet, without honesty, there is no reality. Without reality, there is no love - only illusions. Clutching memories slipping as if pulled by gravity captured me. Thank you for sharing.
appreciated and sorry for the late reply.
I was busy studying....lol.
for everything. I just get dissillusioned with
the truth sometimes I guess. Best to live in an alternate
Reality.