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Cogs of grey membrane turning endlessly
Clutching memories slipping as if pulled by gravity
Endless thoughts and random theories
Midnight frantic dillusions and colourless visions
Stoic face or feigned smiles of fake platitutes
Dreary gloom set over a now vacant and debauched moon
Kiss her hard and pretend to swoon, words rehearsed
to make her believe the absurd
Coerced emotions injected and fabricated and left to bake
Words of affection carefully crafted to prevent rejection
What a strange, paradoxical and theatrical production love is.
Out, out damn honesty. Rehearse the script. Tis not real,
but is what it is ...the thespian wins and the honest fool
partakes of naught, then becomes the understudy to
learn the craft.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Honesty..Smonesty...tell them
what they want to hear...lol.

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sabeel
dear best poet boyschrm6,

a good work..
I like these lines very much..

"Words of affection carefully crafted to prevent rejection"

thanks for share...

SABEEL.teddybear bouquet
andrew149
I think this is brilliant, I like it very much, thanks for posting.......Andrew. cool
madtat29
Tell them what they want to hear?...No those jeans dont make you look fat?...loldrinking
boyshchrm6
Thanks Sabeel. Just telling
it like it is...doh!angel doh
boyshchrm6
A truly great honour to
have your opinion and approval
on this poem Andrew. Thanks.dancing grin peace
boyshchrm6
That's right Madtat. The butt isn't
fat..the guy at the serger was tripping
on acid and cut them wrong...rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing
agoodguy2have
an insightful appreciation of the paradoxes of love..."Out, out damn honesty" says Romeo to Juliet...oh great!!! I'm doomed!
boyshchrm6
Hey thanks Goodguy2..first thing you
gotta do is get rid of that Goodguy image...lol.
-honesty+arrogance=success (boolean algebra I believe)rolling on the floor laughing
jazzy75
boyshchrm - lol...the reality of love...eh! Nicely writtenapplause
boyshchrm6
Thanks Jazzy. Glad you
liked my writing.angel grin peace
mychelle
Tell them what they want to hear, is reality because if we were all honest with each other lots
Of us would be very upset at each other. Very nice poem! I am being honest.
Earlgreytea
Nice read, Canada...
Pinkpoetress
Boyshchrm,
Nice poem. I like the honesty. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
QuietStormF
Very nicely written Boyshchrm.. one of your best I think.. reminds me of the words in a song..

Make them laugh, it comes so easy
When you get to the part
Where you're breaking my heart
Hide behind your smile, all the world loves a clown
[Just make 'em smile the whole world loves a clown]
Wish you well, I cannot stay
You deserve an award for the role that you played [role that you played]
No more masquerade, you're one lonely star
[One lonely star and you don't know who you are]

All the world is a stage
And everyone has their part
But how was I to know which way the story'd go
How was I to know you'd break
[You'd break, you'd break, you'd break]
You'd break my heart


teddybear
boyshchrm6
Well Mychelle I not only think you have to bend the
truth but be deceiptfull. I don't like that idea, but
it seems to be what woman want to hear. (Unfortuneately)
Truth is stanger than fiction and most often rejected by
woman where a contrived lie is believed...what can I say more.
Thanks for your comment...dunno doh frustrated
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much EarlGreyT.
Appreciate comment.dancing beer
caroljoyce
Great write, thankyou.
boyshchrm6
Thanks PinkPoetress. You only think you
like the honesty....lol. dancing banana
boyshchrm6
Yes QS we are all but actors
on a huge stage. Thanks for
your insightful comments. drinking hug peace
Ladybee42
really like this, it's true you can convince someone if you say it enough - but only briefly, then reality cuts in, moping
thanks for sharing these thoughts..wine wine
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6,
Interesting concept. Yet, without honesty, there is no reality. Without reality, there is no love - only illusions. Clutching memories slipping as if pulled by gravity captured me. Thank you for sharing.
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comment CarolJoyce. It is
appreciated and sorry for the late reply.
I was busy studying....lol.grin devil grin
boyshchrm6
Thanks LadyBee for your insight.
angel cool peace
boyshchrm6
Thanks Gnj4u for your input. Well theres pros and cons
for everything. I just get dissillusioned with
the truth sometimes I guess. Best to live in an alternate
Reality.confused comfort hug cool angel bouquet
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