some afternoon dream

the day drones on humming like
the monotone of a tuning fork
a clock ticks slow somewhere
that clocks still actually tick
and the afternoon scrapes on
without a grease of a care

let's get to the end of it
i feel so cubed in here behind
drab business fabric walls
that time discretely slices
a million light years apart

contemplate the time and wait
for the workday to terminate
if only for today so i can
release my soul to the air
flying my sonic imagination

high away from procedures
and scintilla of policies
through canyons of colors
to rise like leavened bread
and grow into something holy

there is much of life's water
slipping past my boat, spoons,
buckets, oceans of life, of days
with names that i don't know
that somehow feel my presence

i run to the ramparts of the day
jump over the stones and flee
a spirited dash to the forest
my chains clanking in the dirt
a melodious tinkling sound

© agoodguy2have 2010-04-23
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
this one's dedicated to solong...

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Comments (12)

tomboygirl
this is very good,i loved the first and last verse best,very atmospheric!
NeverEndingStory
Bloody fantastic! Where does it come from?? Wow! teddybear
caroljoyce
This is superb,no brilliant!you take the reading write into the imagery of the poem; I parts it reminded me of The Wasteland.
What I love about you is that, despite your own admirable talent you always take the time to encourage others. I much prefer this to food ones; feast for the imagination,
CXXXpeace cheering applause cheering applause
caroljoyce
Please excuse my typos-I am having a hard time.I mean, Take the reader right into the poem.
boyshchrm6
Wow excellent write. Reminds me of
the Woodstock era...you flower childthumbs up head banger
Earlgreytea
Brilliant, ny friend, brilliant...
Happygolucky4u
crying I could actually feel the words. I miss ticking clocks. And I must say. Run you can make it, run like the windteddybear
Ladybee42
oh man, i'm with you over the ramparts..yay
i only have to work until june the way i do right now, then it all changes....wine wine
Jfuhrer
lovely poem
madtat29
Days with no names...genius goodguydrinking
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - definitely one of my favorites!! i just love your messages and imagery! Escape is made!!gotta go joy cartwheel
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
To break out of the cubicle and ...like leavened bread...grow into something holy is a marvelous thing for a soul to do. WOW!
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