the day drones on humming like the monotone of a tuning fork a clock ticks slow somewhere that clocks still actually tick and the afternoon scrapes on without a grease of a care
let's get to the end of it i feel so cubed in here behind drab business fabric walls that time discretely slices a million light years apart
contemplate the time and wait for the workday to terminate if only for today so i can release my soul to the air flying my sonic imagination
high away from procedures and scintilla of policies through canyons of colors to rise like leavened bread and grow into something holy
there is much of life's water slipping past my boat, spoons, buckets, oceans of life, of days with names that i don't know that somehow feel my presence
i run to the ramparts of the day jump over the stones and flee a spirited dash to the forest my chains clanking in the dirt a melodious tinkling sound
this is very good,i loved the first and last verse best,very atmospheric!
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 23, 2010
Bloody fantastic! Where does it come from?? Wow!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 23, 2010
This is superb,no brilliant!you take the reading write into the imagery of the poem; I parts it reminded me of The Wasteland. What I love about you is that, despite your own admirable talent you always take the time to encourage others. I much prefer this to food ones; feast for the imagination, CXXX
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 23, 2010
Please excuse my typos-I am having a hard time.I mean, Take the reader right into the poem.
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What I love about you is that, despite your own admirable talent you always take the time to encourage others. I much prefer this to food ones; feast for the imagination,
CXXX
the Woodstock era...you flower child
i only have to work until june the way i do right now, then it all changes....
To break out of the cubicle and ...like leavened bread...grow into something holy is a marvelous thing for a soul to do. WOW!