i see your face, your eyes gaze and know there's a heart just below that's broken beyond any words that i can key here the downturn of lips and slant of wrinkled eyes furrowed with sorrow says all that your heart can muster to pump up your flushed cheeks against the realities of loss with futures uncertain except for the loss of the past... fresh, wet, blurry, as near as self is to self if only i could wipe your soul like a pair of grimy glasses with a fresh handkerchief and gingerly slide it before your eyes so tomorrow came with colored clarity time...time...only time will show you
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 25, 2010
Beautiful ^_^
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 25, 2010
Hey needn't have mentioned those wrinkles..great write, I am just in a silly mood.
lavinaParadise, IndonesiaApr 25, 2010
I like it, and yeah time will be the answer
tomboygirllarnaca, Larnaca CyprusApr 25, 2010
Yes i know the feeling..thanks for the share
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 25, 2010
Lovely poem. I especially liked the line, if only i could wipe your soul like a pair of grimy glasses with a fresh handkerchief..Very touching and moving. Good one, GoodGuy!
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandApr 25, 2010
Aaaa! what a heart,so tender & loving,real good guy.Loved this poem of yours.God bless your dear heart.
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