Love female male Human ratio 7 women to 1 man Some men Only seek a quick fix Just a pick up At the local Stop and go For a snack A temporary bandaid Not real romance Not a cherished Wife! Just a copy replica Not an Original Or Antique with Character! Genuine Authentic Woman!
Animals learn The language of love The Art of communication It will take "Real" effort work
The mating dance If they didn't Pay attention Critters big or small Would Not have a chance To stand At the dance At ALL! Too many competitors Males seeking a female To win The keys to her hearts True affections! They have to play by The rules of the animal kingdom The fittest biggest best Of the species "Survival of the fittest" Best in manners stature! Or they Will Not Win the prize Estrogen Is She Ready By scent Vs. Testosterone Needs patience!
Once I observed A couple dance so elegantly I gave them a compliment Of I'd pay money For a video of that dance I think they danced 1 waltz then 2 of the two step Dances I observed 3 dance songs They danced to So sweet tender Great Rhythm In Sync unison step beat! He came back with a vulgar remark of do u want to watch us ***k too!
My mouth dropped open I Almost hit the floor It was a compliment A small quaint dance place With always a great band! Country Western Music! That crowd dances in couples circling around the floor with peace on earth! At Four Corners Country Western Club Wasilla Alaska
Good ole' boys don't put up with jerks they quickly 4 of them Take them gather Him off the floor With their mammoth broad shoulders & huge bi-ceps Bulging in their Arms of their shirt & Country Western attire Escort them out the back door! Tell him U r Done 4 tonight! & Say don't come back now Do u hear! Not til u r sober! No more tonight! I don't expect to see u Til Next Saturday night U r grounded From this peaceful place Don't spoil our party! And I mean it! Or u will be banned for life! Grow up! They don't let jerks spoil their dance Of romance with their mate on their important date! They were The only couple on the floor! He must have been drunk! I was at a public place At a public dance!
He was so handsome Conceited He lost that beautiful Blonde blue eyed woman Her elegance flowed as they circled around the floor It was like watching Fred Astaire & Ginger Rogers! She told me he blew it infidelity lust & He has fleas I'm Done never touch me again!
30 years pass I returned to that club Guess who Was sitting at the counter The same dancing man! A Has been Not a Star Lost to lust A quick roll in the hay To lose The True Love of his Life! The mother of his children The seeds of his loins Vs. His wild oats sewn! He lost his children's Happy home of family To lust His children no more He gave up his rights For a roll in the barn Up in the haystacks Fragrant by pigs and cows Too cheap for a room Broke on his *ss Where Dogs catch fleas No longer a man But a man w***e Not worth taking home Not timeless or priceless But penniless That male s**tte Would never be touching Not sleeping with me!
His beauty Queen Long gone Now a male pauper Fit for only the grave Infested w trash worms maggots nothing good To bring home to momma Not proud To the son she bore With nothing To show for His 60+ Years on this earth But Lonely empty soul Faking his dreary days With no smiles on his face Numb to the human race The world does not like him From the choices he's made Self inflicted agony Vs. Peace I can't offer him pity For hurting His Pretty wife! Once handsome NOT anymore Beer gut Bald Ugly self obsorbed He said something to me He didn't deserve a response!
I wanted to refrain with Do You want to watch me ***k Too? But I couldn't I could only ignore him The Fool lost Mrs. Wonderful! Mr. Lust Rachael_0622
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Posted: Apr 2020
About this poem:
*Updated Men talkin' about men U can't beat em' up 'Cause there bigger than u! Men "The Judds"
Men need help badly an education Men r from mars women R from Venus I'm working on finding a gentleman One that it's ok with him To worship a higher power He doesn't expect me to worship him But God Have no other Gods before me The first of the 10 commandments
Timotie What a nice read before I lay down to rest You quenched my thirst Filled my heart Fed my soul Gave me hope Gave me spiritual nutrition Food for thought Gave me peace willing You restored loneliness w companionship And I didn't even know you would be here for my viewing Awww u r my angel for the day U made my day Dear! Thank you Rachael_0622
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 19, 2023
Beautiful writing, stirs up a lot of emotions and that is great wrtting
The subject is so sad, to be able to hold such beauty for two people to let it blow away to dust..no matter how you look at it, its takes 2 to distroy something worth while, yes there are people who are just so bitter you can't go past it and that's sad, someone did that to them and it rules their lives..
Anyway to heavy and am sorry, your voice is strong and special, thank you for this today
Comments (11)
I'm happy with it now
*Great Read!
Rachael_0622
What a nice read before
I lay down to rest
You quenched my thirst
Filled my heart
Fed my soul
Gave me hope
Gave me spiritual nutrition
Food for thought
Gave me peace willing
You restored loneliness w companionship
And I didn't even know you would be here for my viewing
Awww u r my angel for the day
U made my day Dear!
Thank you
Rachael_0622
The language of love
The Art of communication
It will take
"Real"
effort work
I Like this part.
Finally I have a chance to read urs here. Anyway no autocorrect on my computer so if I make some grammatical error pardon me.
Thank you
It seems u enjoyed it
God Bless
We are all working on progress!
Peace
Rachael_0622
Beautiful writing, stirs up a lot of emotions and that is great wrtting
The subject is so sad, to be able to hold such beauty for two people to let it blow away to dust..no matter how you look at it, its takes 2 to distroy something worth while, yes there are people who are just so bitter you can't go past it and that's sad, someone did that to them and it rules their lives..
Anyway to heavy and am sorry, your voice is strong and special, thank you for this today