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Brokenhearted blues

When you went out just like a candle
I done cried the whole night long
cried the whole night long
rolling down
rolling down
from my head down to my shoe

'Twas more than I could handle
that night were long
night were long
all the stars had gone
lemme drown, lemme drown
ain't never gettin' over you

When I be crossing that River Styx
Lord have mercy
ain't no ferryman
gonna take my crown
take my crown
he just gonna lay me down
with a heart so blue
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Posted: Jul 8
About this poem:
writing me some blues

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Yes Siree Ocean,
I could almost here the slide guitar.

Regards Mick

Hope your days get brighter.
lovecanberealonline today!
I can hear that "bluesy twang" when I read this........thumbs up
Oceanzestonline today!
thanks team cool
I did a song for Memorial Day at the karaoke bar called Don't Pay The Ferryman by Chris DeBurgh, in it there is a story about the boat with the old man wanting his payment before he gets to the other side.daydream dancing
Oceanzestonline today!
yeah good song that McR
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