the love letters

they post each other so openly
with their devotional sentiments
toward one another a wide, awake
for all the rest of us to see

why do I feel uncomfortable
as an intruder, some interloper
into the unabashed beautiful display
of two people opening hearts

as if to see their blood spilled
on some dusty lane in midsummer
the worldly army marching past
oblivious to the cradled in arms

bringing together or tearing apart
no matter to the future, evening
they look at each other eye-to-eye
and know all love is right now

© agoodguy2have 2010-06-13
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
when two people come together, totally accepting each other, nothing else matters

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Comments (17)

paloma66
sigh help dunno sad flower Its a sad,bigoted world,one cant help feeling sorry for those who live in it.I was under the impression that CS was a free site for all.Never knew there were head-hunters'
Kacey_01
Wish i could do love like you GoodGuy, you show your maturity again. Like the double meaning in the last line to grin
desertshores
1 thumb up.

(and thanks again for yer support)
dreamwolf5264
is love all that matters? what am i missing? nice poem g.g.thumbs up
hedistuff
what have we got to fear? nothing...good write goodguy...
Redex
Yes wonderful poetry comes out of strong emotion, and agree strong emotion is always oblivious to all around loved the read.handshake
caroljoyce
You had me fooled for a minute, until I saw what you had written at the end, great twist, although I almost missed it. But I know you would never, ever be cynical as you do not know how.sigh Want some lessons?
Pinkpoetress
GoodGuy,
I had to read it twice, but this poem was very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Swan87
"" they look at each other eye-to-eye
and know all love is right now ""

Love is in the air .. I can feel it ..
Thanks GoodGuy
applause applause

Swan
Dalim
simply awsome


lucid and haughty
royester24
beautifull sentiments on
love good guy thumbs up handshake
maymyo
Love is too precious to let go by - grab it with both hands and ignore the cynics of this world - you may never get another chance. Go Goodguy. purple heart Maymyo
Ladyjj
Nothing to loose..but everthing to gain..knows no shame for thoose who are lucky in finding their hearts entwined...angel

A lovely poem agoodguy2have..a pleasure to read.thumbs up
Ljj wave
Happygolucky4u
Wow I really liked this poem. And what you said in the about this poem part. What a romantic you are.bouquet
jazzy75
lovely letters my friend...nice readthumbs up
Nordviking
Poet !
Eye candy no doubt ! Thanks my friend for sharing this masterly written poem. You have a gift delivered there :-)

A.J.
Proudamerican100
Wow very nice daydream
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