barrel staves

Always probing the nature of nature
Well what do think of that

Strong with that midwestern stoicism
Ready to take the cold knocks of life

Start a conversation, open it up
Look at the angles of love, side to side

Talking of the hard drinks of life
The harder drink of love and loss

Stave off the hard knocks, take note and
Accept faith from someone worthy

Young men tired of war are hard to
Find a way to make peace and live there

There's a cold whole world out there
And thoughts as deep as a February snow

Rhymes don't matter at the bottom of a Barrell
It's always the deeper reason of emotion

Waiting and watching for open love
In time she'll come in from the cold

And wash his memory of the one who nicked
His heart and pride, to write forlorn poetry

Still stalwartly need to press on with vigor
Task at hand ... living, waiting, living

© agoodguy2have 2010-05-20
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
not so much in his style, but in admiration of Barrellofart.

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Barrellofart
Very nice.

Out of everything, I exceptionally love the term 'midwestern stoicism'.

Way cool, man. thumbs up
Pinkpoetress
GoodGuy,
Excellent write. He will enjoy this I just know. Thanks for sharing.
Earlgreytea
"Talking of the hard drinks of life
The harder drink of love and loss"

"midwestern stoicism"

powerful, deep and unusual phrases, I enjoyed it, thank you...
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Thank you for sharing this veneration of BoA (Barrell of Art) Always probing the nature of nature.
Dalim
In a word 'Awsome'
danielbrown
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A gift for you
When love is given and given back
It’s a gift, We must treasure it
If you give your friendship to me
I would give it back to you
As a gift from me
So friendship is a treasure
And a gift you gave of which
I’m giving back to you now
Have a fantastic weekend
My buzzing friend
Your friend
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hedistuff
nice write goodguy...washing memory..is it then removed or merely tidied up?
caroljoyce
Good poem writen with a good deal of though and care; great job.thumbs up
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - nicely done...full of character thumbs up
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