Tightly Strung

A natural at this music business, I follow
note-clarity programmed into me by
years of aging wood and strings stretched
to the correct level of tautness
to avoid the breaking point.

If not so soundly set in its ways
my keyboard might venture
to dance wildly to a tune or two
and harmonize with the instruments
that serenade the world that surrounds.

With a hairline cleft in my soundboard
that might crack to the touch, if not gentle,
I fear a cacophony of sound that could
erupt when gravity sets me into motion
as fingers press down, strike my sharps.

Yet, my heart races allegro with each
key compression, as notes, my notes
blend magically one with the other.
Stringing its sweet melody that
does not, with harshness, sting
but rather brings true joy

making music out of life
making life out of music.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jun 2010

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agoodguy2have
gnj: a beautiful analogy of life to music to instrument, "My heart races up and down with each
touch of my keys while notes, my notes,
blend one with the other" is beautiful, though my impression is that you're not THAT "Tightly Strung" ;-)
mubodj
making music out of life= transfer of energy
making life out of music= transfer of energy
transfer of energy = life
good analogy, thanks for sharing gnj4u
andrew149
spent a while last night thinking on this one, very thought provoking, thankyou gnj4u......Andrew.....xxx
trurorob
deep one, like a concerto!, enjoyable read!
rob
hedistuff
hey...I love your sound
Ladybee42
coola boola.. applause
BeneathePines
a wherewithal to unwind. thankyou onemore, Gnj ~: )
Happygolucky4u
Life is a song and I love the melody is the caption on my profilelaugh I see now I am not the only one that feels that way.bouquet Thank you for the beautiful notes to add to my day.
Redex
What a wonderful comparison you make beautiful music gn 4u A wonderful share thankyouteddybear
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have, mubodj, andrew149, trurorob, hedistuff, Ladybee42, freeatlast64847, BeneathePines, Happygolucky4u, and Redex,
Even though most of my writes are without rhyme, it is wonderful making music with all of you! Thank you for your "sound" comments!
Earlgreytea
Vintage Massachusetts...
gnj4u
Hi, Earlgreytea,
I always appreciate your comments. Vintage...Does this mean I have found my poetic voice?
jazzy75
The music you create is beautiful and perfect for that moment in time. Excellent write my friend.hug
tomboygirl
enjoyed this,thankyouthumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, jazzy75 and tomboygirl,
Your comments are music to my ears. Thank you.
sophiasummer
My heart races up and down with each
touch of my keys while notes, my notes,
blend one with the other.


wave gnj4u
i simply loved it. Thankyou x
bouquet
angel
gnj4u
Hi, sophiasummer,
Thank you. I am happy that my poem's notes were pleasing to you.
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