a poem snack

just a few quick words, a few quick lines
not to make you salivate, just a small satiate
to put in your mind a little idea, a smile
not to give meaning to life, just to last awhile

a stanza or two, just to get you through
some tight squeezed passage of time
and brush the dirt away from the time of this day
no big revelations, just a few words of rhyme

© agoodguy2have 2010-07-07
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Posted: Jul 2010

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Comments (16)

Redex
thankyou g-guy did give me a smile, I read the title wrong eyes must be bad at this time at nightpeace
freeatlast64847
Nice little break! Thanks!
paloma66
Nice snack....enjoyed it.dancing banana
andrew149
It helped a little, but still hungry.........Andrew.
paloma66
Nice snack....enjoyed it.dancing banana
Happygolucky4u
My snack is now all gone. Can I have morelaugh
katiebelle7
I liked it .. very clever
kyriacos2009
goodguy...simple but effective...nice write friend...thumbs up
Aerosmith92
I like it.
It seems a bit cute and quirky, definitely a little pick me up.
hedistuff
I salute you...prose prim guru
it's men and women like you that make the poet's room a happy home...
sophiasummer
"Please sir, can I have some more"flower
angel
blackhawk70
more please im saying it like oliver twist. laugh another good one goodguy. thumbs up head banger peace
sophiasummer
oh! goodguy2havedoh
snacks only stimulate the appetite
now that's tantalizingwow
Great wee write, saw the ins and outs.
nicely weaved.

angel cool
caroljoyce
Glad you managed to extinguish that flamin' female.
Delicatessen word takeaway,will neither make late or pile on the weight.pizza cake
Earlgreytea
You captured in a few words why we all do this..., although, I'm sure there are an infinite number of other subtle hues..., beautiful thanks!
jazzy75
And a healthy snack I must say! Nicely donehandshake
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