digest

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

Jul 2010 484 Views 10 comments

digest

in the belly of the line
peristalsis undulations
gut wrenching lamentations
emotions so hard to digest

the fullness of phrase
protrudes button
pregnant with meaning
there is life in words

and excrement too
the colon separates
balancing worth of word
from meaningless waste

© agoodguy2have 2010-07-29

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Posted: Jul 2010

About this poem:

again with the food / inspirational / love conundrum ...let's make it health ;-)

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Comments (10)

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 29, 2010

aha! love it my friend!! this is brilliant!!!

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAJul 29, 2010

You're gonna get some comments on that last stanza!

Enjoyed it friend...

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJul 29, 2010

ha!, much could be digested from this!
rob

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAJul 29, 2010

very creative guy...might one man's meaningless waste be another's foie gras?...(somebody stop me)

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 29, 2010

Very true, very true,,, who hasn't ever said or written a load of cr,,,,p);

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKJul 29, 2010

I liked this Goodguy..try fennel tea ..it helps with digestion!.

Ljj..

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAJul 29, 2010

please try the fennel tea,

please....i just ate my dinner...

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAJul 29, 2010

Hi, agoodguy2have,
in the belly of the line... Simply fantastic!

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandJul 29, 2010

Have the Fennel tea everyday to cure your symptoms of the C...,written by others that you find hard to digest.Try to take it all in your stride,live & let live,allow everyone to enjoy this corner,C... or no C...,continue to live up to your User name,we appreciate your intellect but delete the barbs.Lets enjoy your Aura out here.