Haiku Less

by amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota, USA

Aug 2010 752 Views 12 comments

Haiku - Less

Author: amahlala

A growing trend
Among the CS Poetry Friends
Never to end

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Posted: Aug 2010

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A lite haiku

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Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 8, 2010

So let it grow
The pens must flow
lets see the Haiku glow

Ljj

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 8, 2010

AHA!...4-9-4---nearly there....lol

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 8, 2010

Thanks Ladyjj....

Tis why it was "less" Andrew!

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainAug 8, 2010

Lala with the bug!
rob

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 8, 2010

I "caught" the flu!

gardenhackleStratford, Connecticut USAAug 8, 2010

Oh, it'll get worse. Horrible affliction that Haiku bug. :) Can't say I'm sorry you got it, though.

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 8, 2010

Immune, I....

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAAug 9, 2010

all these poem lines
from some hot August poets pens
and not one rhyme word

;-)

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 9, 2010

Thanks everyone...although I think I "caught" the Haiku Flu for only 24 hrs....I shall leave the penning of these little gems to those that are gifted!

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAAug 10, 2010

I like it! Very cool amahlala...perhaps you can squeeze out one more :)

walkermanok, IndiaAug 16, 2010

may the flow be perennial amahlala

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAAug 16, 2010

lovely stuff, you hit the poets on the head..

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