can we conjure something worthwhile with magical hat and secret potion something to entertain and beguile turn wasted time to forward motion
the brave and wise to turn it better days of valuable enchanted bliss a valuable asset from forlorn debtor tomorrow's memories sweet reminisce
pick on ground for philosopher's stone black, white, yellow and red stages some elixir of life, the end postpone mystic great work down through the ages
let this life's quality be foretold and not be what we all most dread life’s alchemy changing lead into gold not richly lost, change gold into lead
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 9, 2010
Well yes, definitely, witch to wizard ....Charming, thoughtful, innocently wisely write, with hints of magical undertone. Er Dave, you left your name on it.
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAAug 9, 2010
GoodGuy, Another great poem. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. They just keep getting better.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 9, 2010
Loved all in this Dave, the rhyme suits my tuning to
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Er Dave, you left your name on it.
Another great poem. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. They just keep getting better.
Rooting for the brave and wise to turn it better and life’s alchemy changing lead into gold. May the good guys win!
We can always change lead into gold because we always are the core of our goodness and richness...
Much said, beautiful...
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