Sol satisfied

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

Aug 2010 754 Views 11 comments

Sol satisfied

unnerved synaptic society
uplifting and touching
all hedonism and piety
leaning on and clutching

seeing all of either ends
here before the soliloquy
all the praying and pretends
chained to being set free

carried in the heavy flesh
the mantra of life was cried
some stable nativity crèche
mined exploded as empathy died

yielding profit of prophecy
father to brother to sister
branching out of family tree
hands to ring we kissed her

what may come to creed or race
these rounded days do explain
all men, women face-to-face
know only love can sustain

© agoodguy2have 2010-08-20

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Posted: Aug 2010

About this poem:

well...it's in the reader

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Comments (11)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 22, 2010

Liked this, read a few times and chuckled too, but were are you

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAAug 22, 2010

Ok you aren't fooling me

I keep a dictionary close by

Very interesting read. If love out last it all then the world actually could be considered a success

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 22, 2010

Hey GG Some bug has got you

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 22, 2010

A love bug

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 24, 2010

Love the electricity flowing through us all....

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKAug 25, 2010

Sol, the spirit of love. Only just sussed this one.

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 25, 2010

"...all men, women face-to-face
know only love can sustain"

In the larger context of the write, the last stanza seems to beg the question "is this knowing enough to change our societal or world path?"

If it isn't enough, what then is? Perhaps we are being "called" to take things a step further by making the choice to more fully embody what we know?... to BE Love itself, as individuals, as a society, as a world?

Your write is both pointed and liberating goodguy