In Future's Defense

Bold feathers reflecting
sunbeams red in
flight’s pattern to
elude
small, winged force of
nature protecting
generations
swoops outsized
dives hard
into vulnerability
unseen but felt
dark, small,
unrelenting
to distract
from future’s
cradle until
regal red-tailed
intruder
departs.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2010

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ben999
soft poetry, with a feather touch, i like.thumbs up
caroljoyce
Stylish write as ever, gn4u.
gnj4u
Hi, ben999, agoodguy2have, and caroljoyce,
I had one impression when I first viewed the two birds in flight. Paying closer attention, however, allowed me to see what was really going on. I had hope to capture that experience in this poem, as both reality and allegory. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!
Happygolucky4u
I actually did not think bird till I read the other commentslaugh While reading for some reason I thought of fighter planesblues bouquet
niah9
yes me too, but then the clue was in the first line, feathers, but I'd focused on Defense....just shows how we all read things differently....love writing about nature, so much scope...Niahgrin teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Happygolucky4u and niah9,
How fun to have this float to the surface again. Although both birds were doing what they must for survival (defending their future), I was amazed at the strength, agility and determination of the smaller bird, seemingly at greater disadvantage, who was eventually successful. Yes, nature does have so much to offer us! Thank you for your comments.
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