Haiku
In the haiku, "In shadows we roamed" sets the scene of a relationship that once existed, where the lovers were intertwined in each other's lives, sharing moments both bright and dark. "Echoes of love now faded" signifies that the intensity and passion of their love have diminished over time, leaving behind only faint remnants of what once was. Finally, "Lost souls find solace" suggests that despite the loss and heartache, there is still hope for healing and finding peace in the aftermath of lost love. It speaks to the resilience of the human spirit and the possibility of moving forward despite the pain.
Haiku v Senryu
The subtle difference between Haiku & Senryu.
Drive Thru
Another haiku, I used to work fast food from 10/88 - 1/93, and I never had to work the drive thru.
Belmont Parade
Another haiku, another parade nine miles from the first parade that was in Platteville, Wisconsin, which is in the southwest corner of the state. This parade was in Belmont, Wisconsin. On Sunday, it's off to WI Dells!
Parade
Haiku on the parade I went to today on September 9, 2023 for Dairy Days in Platteville, Wisconsin.
Haiku
just a few for fun
Aloneness explained
Haiku/ Senryu 3 lines 7-5-7 syllables
Attraction
When we first met...
It doesn’t wait
"Time waits on no one". A true saying...
Gathering Clouds in Moonlight (haiku)
Grey mountain of sky Eating valiant silver ships Wild drunk on moon blood
Mountain (haiku)
Like a fish bone knife Patiently gutting stray clouds For silver lining.
Senryu
nature inspired
Senryu
Parental stress.
Senryu x 3
mucking around
Against the Odds...Haiku.
A poem of hope for Ukraine.
Traveling dreams
Joining the crowd, trying Senryu
Lost Freedom
Once free,now lost.
The Trial...
It seems senryu is taking over here temporarily. I thought I'd add a lighthearted attempt.
Forever Love
Experimenting a little more with Haiku (nature) versus Senryu (feelings) .....5-7-5 format. Using a very structured format when writing poetry often helps to create such creativity and emphasis on words denoting feelings......amazing how descriptive language becomes....like music almost following conventions.
Unrequited Love
Just thoughts
Winter horse
Lets try Tanka, even with a bit of rhyme
Senryu
ok I'm in too, gotta try this..
First Glance (Senryu)
In tribute to Socrates........".thanks for enlightening me to this sub-form of Haiku-like style "
missed kiss
senryu (5-7-5) not half haiku
What is Haiku?
These few words I write Are stripped as bare as Winter Haiku poetry © lovecanbereal
PROLUTION
“In the future, all parts of the body and brain,” the professor beamed at his rapt audience “will be replaceable.” “PROMAN will pursue his ever-adjustable programs forever. He will affix to and discard from his body, as required, all th
The Outsider View
A random mix
1920's haiku
the feel of the jazz age
Morning haiku
staying by the beach
FOOD HAIKU POEMS
Just thinking of food for fun.
Couple of haiku
70's music
War Haiku - another take
Following Ocean’s steps
Music Haiku
Music Haiku
War Haiku
a few lines, next time I'll write about kittens and flowers.
Ocean’s haiku challenge-2
Another try..
HAIKU FOR YOU (with bonus feature of author's interpretation) - "What do ghost see in a mirror?"
"What do ghosts see in a mirror?" Oak's underbelly. where dreams appeal naturally mom slipped from the crypt. Oak's u
Haiku 3
toying with some more, think we are progressing..
OZ …..Haiku Challenge
Just having a crack ……
Haiku challenge
Just trying..
Troubles Behind (Haiku Challenge)
I love Haiku!!
RE: Choose which sorrow.
Thank you, yaspark. I agree, we can't forget the good things either....
RE: Or Would We ?
Thank you Sun n Sea, yes childhood is a great time !- we could often get away with being mischievious ! I myself was a huge tom-boy, until I discovered later- that not all of them wanted to push me off of the top of a hill while playing king on the m...
RE: A Child's Pain
48jojo.....those experiences must have produced some indescribable memories. Thanks for the share and feedback....
RE: Said The Blind Man
love the poem really made me think hope all is well....
RE: Bye Bye Facebook
Andrew pipped me at the post, I had a job leaving though it was a merrigoround to delete. Enjoyed the poem...
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