Haiku
In the haiku, "In shadows we roamed" sets the scene of a relationship that once existed, where the lovers were intertwined in each other's lives, sharing moments both bright and dark. "Echoes of love now faded" signifies that the intensity and passion of their love have diminished over time, leaving behind only faint remnants of what once was. Finally, "Lost souls find solace" suggests that despite the loss and heartache, there is still hope for healing and finding peace in the aftermath of lost love. It speaks to the resilience of the human spirit and the possibility of moving forward despite the pain.
haiku serenity
the sound of silence its mesmerising nature peaceful and serene
Haiku v Senryu
The subtle difference between Haiku & Senryu.
Drive Thru
Another haiku, I used to work fast food from 10/88 - 1/93, and I never had to work the drive thru.
Belmont Parade
Another haiku, another parade nine miles from the first parade that was in Platteville, Wisconsin, which is in the southwest corner of the state. This parade was in Belmont, Wisconsin. On Sunday, it's off to WI Dells!
Parade
Haiku on the parade I went to today on September 9, 2023 for Dairy Days in Platteville, Wisconsin.
Haiku
just a few for fun
1920's haiku
the feel of the jazz age
Aloneness explained
Haiku/ Senryu 3 lines 7-5-7 syllables
Attraction
When we first met...
It doesn’t wait
"Time waits on no one". A true saying...
Gathering Clouds in Moonlight (haiku)
Grey mountain of sky Eating valiant silver ships Wild drunk on moon blood
Mountain (haiku)
Like a fish bone knife Patiently gutting stray clouds For silver lining.
Senryu
Parental stress.
Senryu
nature inspired
Sweet Release
Cadenced footsteps quicken A jangle of keys Now freedom and release. © lovecanbereal All rights reserved
Green Haiku
Green - the colour of life
Senryu x 3
mucking around
The Trial...
It seems senryu is taking over here temporarily. I thought I'd add a lighthearted attempt.
Against the Odds...Haiku.
A poem of hope for Ukraine.
Traveling dreams
Joining the crowd, trying Senryu
Forever Love
Experimenting a little more with Haiku (nature) versus Senryu (feelings) .....5-7-5 format. Using a very structured format when writing poetry often helps to create such creativity and emphasis on words denoting feelings......amazing how descriptive language becomes....like music almost following conventions.
Lost Freedom
Once free,now lost.
Senryu
ok I'm in too, gotta try this..
First Glance (Senryu)
In tribute to Socrates........".thanks for enlightening me to this sub-form of Haiku-like style "
Unrequited Love
Just thoughts
Winter horse
Lets try Tanka, even with a bit of rhyme
missed kiss
senryu (5-7-5) not half haiku
What is Haiku?
These few words I write Are stripped as bare as Winter Haiku poetry © lovecanbereal
AHA! (5-7-5)
Senryu (A short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure, however, senryu tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryu are often cynical or darkly humorous and satiric while haiku are serious)
PROLUTION
“In the future, all parts of the body and brain,” the professor beamed at his rapt audience “will be replaceable.” “PROMAN will pursue his ever-adjustable programs forever. He will affix to and discard from his body, as required, all th
Haiku 5-7-5
ah to walk the cool corridors of elegance in Summer
Nature Haiku 5.7.5.
Nature.
The Outsider View
A random mix
Morning haiku
staying by the beach
War Haiku - another take
Following Ocean’s steps
Oceanzest 5.7.5. Haiku Challenge
the best i could write. I never was goed in haiku
Music Haiku
Music Haiku
Ocean’s haiku challenge-2
Another try..
Haiku Duet.
Haikus are a challenge to say what you want in so few syllables.
War Haiku
a few lines, next time I'll write about kittens and flowers.
RE: From the Bottom of the Hill
Thank you Shadow......
RE: Ancient Prophet
Thank you amahlala. A facinating subject to me which can take a thousand shapes and forms, but always with a fundamental message. cafetwo...
RE: Searching for Love
Southmiami, Wow...I like that....The waves always washes away but returns back.......you"re right!! I totally feel a spiritual connection to my soul mate.....now at this stage in my life. The searching is still necessary from a physical perspective,...
RE: The Child
wow beautiful poem ....
RE: rose
Yes the lovely rose written with love...
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