Word Battle.
It is interesting how a new friend could end up being your inspiration. But it is even more interesting when you know that it also happen at the other end. I sent my new friend a poem upon our friendship. Here's what I came up with:You appeared in my dream
Finally
After long endless conversation
It was faceless
At first
But I never doubt your being
Then came words
Voices
Everything that I need
To materialize you
Should everything be materialized?
Feelings
Longing
Would we ever reach "there"?
Should we stay "here"?
What is "here" and "there"?
Surprisingly he sent me a remarkable reply.
I am here, I am there
I am everywhere
I sail across the oceans of void
To touch the souls of one my fancies caught
Into your room where thou doth reside
I mingle with the cool, spring breeze inside
And if thou should feel thou cheeks faintly caressed
know it was through my gentle touch addressed
At times I linger on for a longer while
and gaze upon your beauty so elegantly adorned
And if you should think in your dreams you hear
tender whisperings of love songs in your ear
Know that it was not a dream
but a visit from another realm
Now I see you, in sleep, your smiles
acknowledging your visitor of a few thousand miles
Our souls do touch, dance & entwine
As if we are heady from heaven's wine
The seconds, the minutes, the hours do pass
As we linger snugly in one another loving grasp
But, alas, then, the sun rising in the East
doth abruptly bring an end to our magical feast
the untimely end of mystical dreams
we both return reluctantly, to physical realms
But never fear because I am near
I am here, I am there
I am everywhere
Now I'm ashamed to call my self a writer
Comments (18)
you are some talent!
btw tulisan temen loe juga kece sih mbak
I'll write a blog about it when I get home!
yes he did reply better, but that is what happens, i am sure if he questions you with his talent, your reply will be over the ranks!
it is always when question is asked, the answerable have better chance of coming on top (only and only if he/she is capable enough).....