the unabridged soul

seeing all, knowing all
defining all, denoting all
living all, feeling all
across reference of notion
for further citations please
refer to the emotional index

it's all been looked up before
it's all been studied before
it's all expounded upon greatly
it's all been good to know

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to feel complete soulful emotion
Homer, Shakespeare, Gothe, an' more
speak across humanity's timeless ocean
to live our lives, they do implore

scrolls, pages, files, some sticks of words
all manner of soliloquies and lyrical songs
relate our human hearts' conditions absurd
observed, we best find where we belong

yet where we belong is so often unknown
whatever fit, the puzzle lies beforehand
being snipe in gutter or king on throne
turn and shape, our piece to comprehend

can others truly know and be known
can we ourselves even know the true us
or is discernment only what we are shown
and path of each only observed as thus

whatever place or path or existence
that woman or man is to stand or stroll
every life has its own insistence
even captive body keeps its own soul

© agoodguy2have 2010-12-10
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Posted: Dec 2010

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niah9
Poetry in my eyes has achieved it's reason for birth if it makes us think...we may not come to the same conclusion, but maybe we find a common link with flow and reason.. I remembered a wise dance coach, who insisted the problems always started a step before it became a problem.....Great write goodguy2have...Niah.
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jeddah12
stunning write sir,,thanks for sharingcheers wine applause
jeddah12
stunning write sir,,thanks for sharingcheers wine applause
marikia
It's all been booked up and studied before,
Was expanded upon and seems quite good to know,
Yet man is at crossroads inquiring thus:
Where do we belong or who we really are.
And the answer I have may be stated as such:
We're going to live and enjoy our lives
In Goodguy's high-spirited joyous style.
pilgrimageoflove
"every life has its own insistence
even captive body keeps its own soul"

You must know something, hey?

wonder-full
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gardenhackle
GG2H, this is a prime example of why you are one of my favorite writers here. I just can't say more. I really, really liked it. thanks
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
is discernment only what we are shown? Perhaps. For better or worse, we are all teachers. When the poet refers to the emotional index , is it the index of emotion's level, the index of all emotions, or both? Just wondering as I stroll... Love the write.
Earlgreytea
[yet where we belong is so often unknown
whatever fit, the puzzle lies beforehand
being snipe in gutter or king on throne
turn and shape, our piece to comprehend

can others truly know and be known
can we ourselves even know the true us
or is discernment only what we are shown
and path of each only observed as thus

whatever place or path or existence
that woman or man is to stand or stroll
every life has its own insistence
even captive body keeps its own soul]


verse like this makes this site worthwhile, you have an exquisite perspective which we all love, dear Goodguy, thanks for sharing...wine
ReaderOfSouls
Not only an unabridged soul but an old soul as well. We all have our place in the universe. :) Wonderfully written!! thumbs up wine hug heart wings teddybear
Macduff5
This is a cleverly crafted poem GG. It speaks of what art is about and particularly poetry. It has all been done before by the great writers of each age. It's what a thinking person does but we each have our own unique individuality our own "unabridged soul".
What we learn on here is the multiplicity of thought that comes through reading and writing poetry and sometimes we're in agreement and sometimes it's new to us. Hopefully we are also defining ourselves to some extent but of course if we were that transparent there wouldn't be much to write about.
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aware3
What a beautifully crafted & expressive poem, and how very true the ? asked " can we ourselves, even know the true us !" A great read ! aware3
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