ah...melancholy 'splendor in the grass'...reminds me of how we once wrote....and ladybee: limericks have set in to this site...with no end in sight....imagine our plight...to get the words right...night after night!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJan 28, 2011
Steeped in thought, sentiment and rhyme. A different style for you, suits you well, but you wear all your suits well, cj
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 30, 2011
Great, insightful poem, and great writing - love lines like "know when life's in the way of livin', ...sorrow shies away from givin'", "steeped and simmered 'n served again" -
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJan 30, 2011
Sorry I missed this one first time GG, what a brilliant poem, each line could be the subject of another write...Thankyou....Andrew...
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusFeb 1, 2011
[don't you know those crossroad blues to deal the devil and pay his dues]
loved this phrase, very zesty, yet another great write, thanks my friend...
Comments (9)
This is a super write, the kind of poem that makes most people think "he could be writing about me there".
Take a bow, this will strike more than a few chords.
Best wishes
Bill
advice and wisdom.
mayhap a limerick a day keeps writer's block at bay?
cj
loved this phrase, very zesty, yet another great write, thanks my friend...