love's liner notes

a form of light from night of naught
came upon a time when none was sought

once upon a time was some years ago
though some might deny it ever was so

you found a love you felt was strong
to last rest of life, did not last long

then looking back at what went wrong
to write broken words in soulful song

don't you know those crossroad blues
to deal the devil and pay his dues

oh i know those notes you slowly sing
love's autumn, cold winter, a lost thing

what love has lost was not in vain
and your love can always come again

to warm the cavities of a forlorn heart
your soulful substance, a work of art

know when life's in the way of livin'
and sorrow shies away from givin'

is when all those feelings arrive
just to let you know that you're alive

amongst the old backward angst
some unforgotten note of thanks

love's leftovers is what remains
steeped and simmered 'n served again

that taught each important lesson
despite love's setbacks to press on

you learn the chorus, a sweet refrain
and your love may always come again

© agoodguy2have 2011-01-15
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
couple o' Cupid's couplets

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Fellsman
Hi Good Guy

This is a super write, the kind of poem that makes most people think "he could be writing about me there".

Take a bow, this will strike more than a few chords. cheers


Best wishes

Bill
Macduff5
Nicely written GG...good to see you back on board again....what do they say we never lose, we always learn. thumbs up
boyshchrm6
Great poem with words of
advice and wisdom.angel head banger
Ladybee42
Ahhh! you found your words again! hug
mayhap a limerick a day keeps writer's block at bay? laugh

thumbs up bouquet bouquet
hedistuff
ah...melancholy 'splendor in the grass'...reminds me of how we once wrote....and ladybee: limericks have set in to this site...with no end in sight....imagine our plight...to get the words right...night after night!
caroljoyce
Steeped in thought, sentiment and rhyme. A different style for you, suits you well, but you wear all your suits well,
cj
SCatlyn
Great, insightful poem, and great writing - love lines like "know when life's in the way of livin', ...sorrow shies away from givin'", "steeped and simmered 'n served again" - wine
andrew149
Sorry I missed this one first time GG, what a brilliant poem, each line could be the subject of another write...Thankyou....Andrew...cool
Earlgreytea
[don't you know those crossroad blues to deal the devil and pay his dues]

loved this phrase, very zesty, yet another great write, thanks my friend...thumbs up
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