Pen an Paper

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Aug 2009 516 Views 11 comments

"Pen an the Paper"

I dip you yet you still offer no words, they're there yet not scribe'd, I stroke my mark yet you don't reply, I hold you carefully dip you again yet no reply, the finest of paper I touch you too yet still no reply, I push gently so's not to pierce yet still no reply, scribble'd stroke on scrap you mark, touch you to my thoughts no reply, walk away an come back dip you again no mark. . . the paper's fine. . . perhaps the pen need's a rest for a bit~

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Posted: Aug 2009

About this poem:

Trying to describe writers block, as best I can.

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Comments (11)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 30, 2009

I don't think so, bentlee, I really don't.....Andrew

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 30, 2009

At least not while you are writing like this.....

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 30, 2009

Lol, i'm not putting my pen down, not a chance, is described how I feel writers block happens, i feel passionate about my writing an will continue to do so:) gee is that a compliment to my works lol

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 30, 2009

wot? so now u want compliments already?

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 30, 2009

Hell no readership's all I wish for, after all whats written by any writer, is a way to give an input to the reader that maybe they can use in their world:) ha cheers my friend.

spiritwalkerCALGARY, Manitoba CanadaAug 30, 2009

Hi looks to me like you are doing just fine in the writing department
words never spoken can never be heard my friend keep the pen in hand the words will flow like the gentle rain
have a great day
your new friend Dorothy

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 30, 2009

Hi Dorothy, u are a sweet soul, ty your kind words are felt. Jon.

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 30, 2009

I don't believe you could truly ever have writer's block..just moments where "they" (poems) fight to see which one gets out first!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 30, 2009

Ah, too funny Ama twisted style as usual, ty I like it:) lol.