it's been decided now the fields have been parched and the forests laid low we must make sacrifices now to effect a change today therefore blood must be spilt.
so prepare your arms and bare your chests wide. begin in your amygdala and find the basest emotion. fear and hate unreasonable instinct ranks understanding.
long steel directs emotion that drone planes cannot feel. reveal yourself with whetted desire to wash soiled layers of field and forest with the blood of others regardless
of merit or worth or need. the consolation of philosophy has no place on this road. there is no toll of penance here at the gate of incivility.
peace being passé, keen to kill as anarchy reigns deep within the fascination of termination, red red red fills the souls, headlines cry out depravity. hear the cries of the dying.
yet in time, peace will return to each, and even to nations. dug up bones will be reburied after careful consideration and a wrenching forgiveness.
season follows season and time and purpose may...may be accepted if not understood. Man has his appointed cycle of seasons and vicissitudes beyond our own tender love.
While reading this incredible piece, I couldn't help but think of the movie 'Brave Heart' with Mel Gibson. Sounds like the sort of stuff 'manhood' was once made of!!
Awesome, Deep, Spiritual, Challenging, Awakening! Great write Goodguy!!!
You made it clear in this poem that all sacrifices made for humanity's sake and for whatever other reasons conceivable, bring about even more sacrifices, and this is a vicious circle, for nothing is more precious that human life, which it is taken nevertheless for saving some other human's life. Is there any way of making reasonable decisions without taking people's lives, do we pay them for aggravating situation even more?!
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMay 4, 2011
GG...you have that certain style at times...a poetic quality that certainly makes one think. Human nature is as it is and not always the most gratifying. One always has to hope that after time "bones will be reburied" and a "wrenching forgiveness" will follow.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 4, 2011
Hi Dave
This is one of those poems that merit being read time and time again - and should be written in 36 point type and placed on the desk of every world leader on the planet...
Congratulations on a really great write expounding a philosophy that all should be counselled to follow...
Wow..you outdid yourself again..this is magnificent. This season just seems to go on forever to me..I do hope it will change one day..yet I don't believe it will be in my lifetime..not grown up enough I think..
outstanding writting a comment sometimes people will take a line or a verse and requote it but doing that on this piece it would do this unjustice the entire writting should be requoted. kickit..
outstanding writting a comment sometimes people will take a line or a verse and requote it but doing that on this piece it would do this unjustice the entire writting should be requoted. kickit..
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 7, 2011
[dug up bones will be reburied after careful consideration and a wrenching forgiveness]
Hi, agoodguy2have, Such a powerful write. The lines referenced by Earlgreytea got my attention, as well. I, for one, am ready for peace to be in season and want nothing to be beyond our own tender love's ability to make it so.
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Awesome, Deep, Spiritual, Challenging, Awakening! Great write Goodguy!!!
This is one of those poems that merit being read time and time again - and should be written in 36 point type and placed on the desk of every world leader on the planet...
Congratulations on a really great write expounding a philosophy that all should be counselled to follow...
Best wishes
Bill
after careful consideration
and a wrenching forgiveness]
a write as sharp as a double-edged sword...
Such a powerful write. The lines referenced by Earlgreytea got my attention, as well. I, for one, am ready for peace to be in season and want nothing to be beyond our own tender love's ability to make it so.