semi-sail

the rig sails on
the captain at the wheel
steel billowed crosswinds
and Willie's gruff twang

come back...maybe not flip-flop
rigs riggin' is sailin', movin'
waving goodbye to yesterday
I'm a stowaway into today

ahead is clear horizon
aft is crewed distant past
the ropes taut, creaking
and diseal's low rumble below

port is where we're headed
starboard is starry shafts
stern relentlessly unappeasable
riding the waves bowed

someday I'll tighten up
swigging the anchor line
laying roots off of route one
but at present, rig's tackin'

we're decked out directly
hauling freight, liners for
what in life we're lackin'
so, harden up to the wind

crestin' hill, descendin' trough
this rollercoaster ride of life
keeps sailin' on to skyline
just the mate 'n' the captain

© agoodguy2have 2011-05-20
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Posted: May 2011

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gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
Love the phrase swigging the anchor line! Your mix of metaphors in semi-sail works well and has us sailin' with the mate 'n' the captain (and Willie) on the road of this rollercoaster ride of life.
boyshchrm6
I'm pitchin' in my armchair Agoodguy and now
have to take a Gravol....doh cheers barf
boyshchrm6
Just to clarify. A great write so realistic
I felt as if I were rockin' into the waves
on the high seas (also of life). Very vivid
and a great analogy.thumbs up applause angel
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