ode underwater

I've got this listing, sinking feeling
that I owed most of my life to my bank.
Hands in the air, reaching for debt ceiling,
yet another fine mess, with no one to thank.

Guns all put down, the pen reigns mightier
can't fight the bank, let alone hit myself.
Contracts contracted, assurances flightier
seems the whole world's overextended itself.

I ode some words, I owed some dollars
'course everyone I talk to is in the same boat.
Can't answer my phone for collecting callers,
looking to ourselves, line of credit, to float.

I'm maxed they've determined, but I'm appealing
my mortgage, in arrears, beyond my credit score.
All my creditors say that defaulting is stealing
I gave a stone and blood, still they want more.

Seems to everyone, I owe myself, that's no joke
shouldn't be depressed, but maybe I oughter.
Dunno if I'm myself, or like all nations folk,
I've underwritten much of this ode underwater.

'course if I owe some B and B owes to C
and C owes somebody else...well back to me,
then it seems that we all owe to each other,
our mountain of debt is brother to brother.

Would some rebalancing of our balance sheets
starve our children, kick us out into streets?
Maybe we should waive our bankruptcy hearing
and admit it's to life we're really endearing.

© agoodguy2have 2011-06-10
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Posted: Jun 2011

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Billiegirl
Your a complicated man. laugh good write
kickit22
how true is that you give someone 20 to pay him loan and he turns give that same 20 to his debtor then so on and so on and sooner or later that same 20 goes back in your hand for somebody who owes you a wage. such a fun read thank you. kickit.
cafetwo2010
I'm 'indebted' to another one of your fabulous writes goodguy. Do you take credit? lol. thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
When the verse starts listing, the poet must ponder how well he writes an ode underwater. Three cheers to underwriting to life we're really endearing.
DaBomb72
Goodguy, now this is a cruel, well penned reality. Tonight this life we are endearing will give me dreams like this one :

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Good guy...good writing !handshake
pilgrimageoflove
Keep your head above at least so you can breath.
great write
nightcrow
debt this poem you wrote sums it up in one
Macduff5
Just think GG...if you could sell the intellectual property of this poem...maybe to Hollywood...your head would be so far above the water...maybe into the stars.cheers
jazzy75
Guess...we'll find out the tally once we view the final balance sheet....lol....well written my friendpeace
simpleME32
I'll not be surprised if you press a button and this poem'' ll apear in greek language,MrDave..water can be salty or sweet..again i wrote about it..maybe you was too busy with..4.002.....to wash your face with my modest lines.Thank you for appreciation...but since you knew everything about Me..you could easily shake hands with green gloves without any phonecall or...ode.Thank you.
boyshchrm6
Quite the vicious circle Agoodguy.
Perhaps governments should set the
example to live within their means.
angel head banger cheers
Pinkpoetress
GoodGuy,
Great write. So true of life. I appreciate your wisdom.
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