just once I'll feel love

just once I'll feel love
until then I'll just wait
sitting patiently, sort of
trying to self-actuate

once hope reigns it's hopeless
no need to cast love aside
catch a lightness to possess
enchanting oneness a rising tide

I'll dig holes for your treasure
'til my hands all calloused and raw
leave lid of chest to open pleasure
let aloneness be a forgotten flaw

feel my way into hearts chamber
each beat another rush of life
ever closer to life's remainder
living begins when hearts derive

love in all it's myriad forms
overt or subtle in it's display
vales are lifted and we transform
enclosed with love, our own cliché

© agoodguy2have 2011-07-13
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Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
is an acrostic quatrain a acrostrain or a quastic?

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Comments (7)

country_lady67
Ahhhh very clever using the first letter to spell out the title. thumbs up wine bouquet teddybear Awesome..
steve1223
I have to agree with country_lady67....very, very clever

cheers
Redex
Ah gg always shows me the way, great this acrostic. But does not detract from the words themselves.teddybear
hedistuff
good morning goodguy! well, there's just all kinds of cute comments waiting to be heaped upon this classic crostic composition. though heart tugging, self-actuate? I'm not sure if this is even legal in the great commonworth. have a terrific thursday...
Odette67
I like how you did this GG, very romantic. heart beating
morbon
Nice play of wordsthumbs up
Fellsman
Hi GG

A clever acrostic, even down to that apostrophe in the 3rd stanza.

An enjoyable read...

Regards

Bill wine wine
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