How did you loose your wings? Did you land softly to earth? Surely you are an angel that has fallen The ground embraces your walk The air is purified by your prescence When you touch water it becomes crystal clear When you speak birds stop to listen Whenever you smile the sun glows brighter When you gaze into my eyes you melt my soul Surely you are an angel In the darkness you radiate In my arms you are exstacy In my mind you are joy and peace and tranquility in my eyes you are an angel without wings If this is but a dream...don't pinch me If this is a vision do not disturb me If this is not a dream let me live forever And if you are an angel then do not forsake me
Lovely and romantic.. just like you.. lol.. good stuff Nu!
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandOct 5, 2011
Boyshchrm,of late I have seen a lot in your poems that is really you,nice gentle,romantic "YOU",I hope and pray the angel without wings,flies down into your arms and appreciates you.Wishing you the best of luck, my friend.Excellent write.
Thanks CloudySky. My angel awaits disquised as mortal. I just need to ferrit her out Cloudy....Sky. So you have connections with the sky..huh..tell me more Cloudy!
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKDec 3, 2011
Angel Without Wings
Thankyou for sharing what is simply such a beautiful Poem Boys :thumbsup
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'The air is purified by your prescence' and 'In my arms you are exstacy' Great lines Boysh
sure hope i am not forsaken..uggggg..
very nice write boyshchrm.
kickit.
Those angels...so hard to get out of your mind. Thanks for sharing.
is that they are usually taken.
A very romantic write, it must be some lady that moves a man to compose lines such as these...
Best wishes
Bill
she said,,,im out on cs cos i broke my wings...im an angel without wings now
The ground embraces your walk
The air is purified by your prescence
When you touch water it becomes crystal clear
When you gaze into my eyes you melt my soul
Excellent.
then I come up with a good line.
Is she gonna be sidetracked to a castle?
Glad you have your angel.
I was smitten by this kitten.
as mortal. I just need to ferrit her out
Cloudy....Sky. So you have connections with
the sky..huh..tell me more Cloudy!
Thankyou for sharing what is simply
such a beautiful Poem Boys :thumbsup