~trust~

what the hell's wrong with you! you don't see it but you breached my trust for you. . . get over it you say an yes I see you say that to everyone DON'T YOU! . . . ya know it's a matter of your, yes your words or actions that caused it, yet you honestly fail to see it an continue to blame all others for your doin's, now I see why ur always pickin on the not so strong people. . . oh I see you loud an clear, you've not the courage to face urself an the quiet ones'll not challenge ur weakness. . .
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Posted: Sep 2009
About this poem:
How it can be sometimes with a person who's always breachin trust in any givin relationship. A thought that came to mind an wanted to write! Cheers all an ty for readin:)

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andrew149
strong words, well written, my dear bentlee, obviously heartfelt and true as you see it, ever observing and commenting on life, as we poets do........andrew
Bentlee
:) ty Andrew, i did want it to be strong in presence as it can be in real life an true situational. Ty for you input an it was well said my friend:)
amahlala
Trust is very fragile ~ those who are not strong will always need someone to back them up......
Bentlee
Ty Ama yes it is very fragile, for everyone, including the tough ones an in some cases thats why the're so tough, broken trust too many times.
amahlala
Stop giving away secrets! Tough peeps have an image to protect! lol
Blizza801
Very nice...I enjoyed reading this very much...good job !!
Bentlee
Lol Ama ok I'll not say a word lol:) cheers my friend:)
Bentlee
Thanks Blizza your comments help keep it in real time. :) appreciated ty.
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