by SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales, UK
Jul 2012 557 Views 7 comments
A Thousand Challenge
A thousand steps
walking a crooked fence
Fell at nine hundred ninety-nine
back to step one I now commence.
walking a crooked fence
Fell at nine hundred ninety-nine
back to step one I now commence.
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I'm not really a poet, but I do have fun adding to something someone else starts! :)P.S.Hi Kickit!
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Comments (7)
They say in life one is intelligent and wise if he/she knows half of truth. I say is important which half of the truth you possess.
where the heck you been.....
well for a short poem it is indeed a large poem
nothing in the meaning is small.
I just had left when you posted.
I cannot stay long here but had to do a
Mike.....
Well, Kickit Mike & Cafe Jim, I've been crazybusy(but the Cat
will eventually be back
And looking forward to checking out everyone's take of those "idle" lines(I think those lines were only in idle like your truck - just taking a short break & ready to go again-they're great lines
For now the thought of starting 1,000 steps again after falling at 999 seems easy compared to my current busyness- but I WILL get there! Looking forward to responding to all who stopped by just as soon as I get the chance - in the meantime, thanks so much, Jazzy, lucy777, Celtic Poet & Motta - what a pleasant surprise to hear from such wonderful poets!!! Thanks for your great comments!!!!
SCatlyn