I doubt it is supposed to be a fun poem.....but I enjoyed the changing jouney of thoughts....
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKAug 8, 2012
I agree with Niah..much more in this than money in a meter..Like it very much.. why spend so much time on a wasted journey.. To arrive home with a clear head and full pocket is always preferable.
Thank you for sharing this well spent time with us Gnj
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKAug 8, 2012
Hi GNJ
I admire your philanthropic mindset when deciding how much to feed those wretched one-armed bandits. However small the amount involved, it will brighten up any motorists day to find a meter with a couple or so unexpired hours remaining.
Hi, niah9, LadyMorgana60, TUPLDRF, Fellsman, Jazzy75 and Odette67, Thank you for your kind responses to my poem reflecting on human nature. I am pleased that each of you was able to find meaning in the reading of this unmetered verse. I enjoy sharing Poet's Corner with each of you; and, thankfully, there is no meter on friendships.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 9, 2012
I like the way you write one can read differently,but I'm glad Friendship is not metered when it comes to having a beautiful friend like you.Thank you for all the that you enlighten us with.
Hi, paloma66 and seerie, Thank you for taking the time to read my free-metered verse and offer your kind comments. May we all continue to share the goodness in ourselves with others, freely, without the meter running.
Hi, Ladybee42, The concept of karma is an intriguing one. I struggle with the thought that all of the pain suffered is due to karma. However, if good is to come from something I've done, it is certainly something to look forward to. Thank you for taking the time to comment and welcome back to Poet's Corner!
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To arrive home with a clear head and full pocket is always preferable.
Thank you for sharing this well spent time with us Gnj
I admire your philanthropic mindset when deciding how much to feed those wretched one-armed bandits. However small the amount involved, it will brighten up any motorists day to find a meter with a couple or so unexpired hours remaining.
A whimsical read...
Bill
Thank you for your kind responses to my poem reflecting on human nature. I am pleased that each of you was able to find meaning in the reading of this unmetered verse. I enjoy sharing Poet's Corner with each of you; and, thankfully, there is no meter on friendships.
Thank you for taking the time to read my free-metered verse and offer your kind comments. May we all continue to share the goodness in ourselves with others, freely, without the meter running.
The concept of karma is an intriguing one. I struggle with the thought that all of the pain suffered is due to karma. However, if good is to come from something I've done, it is certainly something to look forward to. Thank you for taking the time to comment and welcome back to Poet's Corner!