Sometimes I think we must be crazy gnj4u..... Re;ationships are difficult in any way or form...but add distance, and border controls and visa's, and the whole situation goes to another level....and then of course, you have to meet.... Clever write...all the same.....Kathy
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandSep 11, 2012
Simply beautiful ! F
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 11, 2012
Hi gnj4u
There is a touching pathos running throughout this thread: It really is uncanny how the one's who appear to be the most ideal matches are the ones who live furthest away... with all the attendant barriers and obstacles...
A typically thoughtful write from your pen...
Regards
Bill
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusSep 11, 2012
scintillating analogy...
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandSep 11, 2012
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKSep 12, 2012
Much wisdom & truth in your Poem Gnj Very much enjoyed, thanks for sharing.
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USASep 12, 2012
My dearest Joy, I second Niah and of course you know me and my John with such a distance but we brake it all through our high spirits. Love it my friend.
I believe you have found an answer to what many seek with many questions and uncertainties in a most uncertain world we live today...I especially find the following verse very illuminating....
"love expectation, lofty goal friendship’s a far better start allow time to expose the soul its jet streams to the heart"
Beautiful thoughts most graciously shared,
Chris
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USASep 12, 2012
Just a quick 'check-in' Joy and when I saw that you had posted something new, I HAD TO READ IT.... and of course there's going to be a complimentary comment to follow ANYTHING that you write! Absolutely SPOT ON!! You've nailed the scenario with which so many are confronted quite well! I in fact, am one of those who have on a couple of occasions experienced the very heart and soul of your message in this poem. One very lovely lady in England had a very strong draw on my heart for some time, as well as another beautiful soul in Bulgaria!! "Oh, but how 'distance' sure becomes a discouraging factor in LOVE." EXCELLENT CONTRIBUTION!! I'm glad that I stopped in for this treat! Hugs Joy!!!
Hi, niah9, Whether "crazy" or not, it is good that we are an optimistic lot. Hi, Serentiy4two, "beautiful" is a most generous comment. Welcome to Poet's Corner. Hi, Fellsman, My heart is happy for the successes shared and sad for those losses sustained by our fellow poets with my thoughts coming out in this unintended, embedded-sonnet form. Hi, Earlgreytea, "scintillating" ...now that's quite a compliment. Good to see you again in Poet's Corner. Hi, paloma66, Thanks for the positive emoticons. Hi, LadyMorgana60, You are generous to bestow "wisdom & truth" upon my observations. Hi, windyweatherly, Braving "it all through high spirits" is what defines the human spirit and gives hope. Hi, Yankee4you, I "graciously" accept your generous comment. To me it's the difference between the idea of love and the reality of love. Touch, taste, sight, scent, and sound must join the mind to make love a complete package. Hi, swade777, Happy that my poem was fortunate enough to be within sight on your recent 'check-in' and receive such a "complimentary comment" from you. Nice to catch a glimpse of you in Poet's Corner. To all, While posting still remains a challenge for me, your generous comments are most encouraging. My thanks to each of you for taking the time to read my poem and share your reactions through your comments.
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandSep 14, 2012
Hello --i hope you are well , Just wanted to say thankyou so much for welcoming me, in your comments, to " Poet's Corner "--most kind of you --and i look forward to reading more of your and others wonderful poetry in the future , and contributing to the" corner " myself from time to time. Again , your poem "Attained " was just wonderful ! Regards , Fiona
This is a lovely poem Joy, and holds a few truths in it's lines. Love starts with loving and goes on from there and there is no guarantee of anything. Somehow we all know this deep down yet prize love so high we embrace it all the same, perhaps because if we ask 'what are we without love'? the answer is not to our liking and we would rather take all the risks than live a life untouched by love. A very thought provoking write.
Hi, Ladybee42, Yes, all love can do is start. For each of us, the path it takes will be its own. Being a romantic at heart, I believe true love can overcome challenges. Thankfully, you and Robert provide a living example. Hi, jazzy75, Yes, there has to be a chance else all hope would perish. Love built on a strong foundation, from the ground up, can thrive, in spite of challenges. To all, Thank you for taking the time to read and for your kind comments.
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Re;ationships are difficult in any way or form...but add distance, and border controls and visa's, and the whole situation goes to another level....and then of course, you have to meet.... Clever write...all the same.....Kathy
There is a touching pathos running throughout this thread: It really is uncanny how the one's who appear to be the most ideal matches are the ones who live furthest away... with all the attendant barriers and obstacles...
A typically thoughtful write from your pen...
Regards
Bill
Very much enjoyed, thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.
"love expectation, lofty goal
friendship’s a far better start
allow time to expose the soul
its jet streams to the heart"
Beautiful thoughts most graciously shared,
Chris
Just wanted to say thankyou so much for welcoming me, in your comments, to " Poet's Corner "--most kind of you --and i look forward to reading more of your and others wonderful poetry in the future , and contributing to the" corner " myself from time to time.
Again , your poem "Attained " was just wonderful !
Regards , Fiona
A very thought provoking write.