Self impossed exile

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Oct 2009 740 Views 13 comments

Self impossed exile

Implanted inside the known rubic's cube hoping colours outside will complete, twisting an turning from inside the cube trying to do it an set the mind free, from inside the cube you'll not reach the key, you've got to step out to see what you need, you can peel off the stickers an colour it right thats if you want the easy way out. . . . . . ~

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Posted: Oct 2009

About this poem:

Inspired by Gypsyheart's recent poem about being stuck inside yourself. "Solitary confinement of loneliness"

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trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 25, 2009

very good Bentlee
rob

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 25, 2009

full of much wisdom my friend, thanks Bentlee!!

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 25, 2009

Ty Rob, from experience I know how tough it can be to climb out. We've all walked dark times in our life.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaOct 25, 2009

lol ty Jazzy :)

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaOct 25, 2009

So right my friend Bentlee-its only a self impossed exile my friend...peel off the stickers-i like that...

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaOct 25, 2009

thoughtful logic words as math. theory , thanks for ur share

longhairedwomanRiverhead, New York USANov 2, 2009

And sometimes one special person might come along... one who can see through all the outside colors to the inner core...

Neostylites_, IranNov 3, 2009

Thanks Bentlee for your enjoyable, wisely yet simply clarificatory pure poem.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 4, 2009

Lol Gypsy, seek off the stickers an have it your own way day lol, glad you enjoyed:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 4, 2009

I like your comment Khaled ty for that perspective:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 4, 2009

L h w now there's something most people would like, true understanding of self eh, ty for your thoughts:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 4, 2009

Ty Neo for your comment, I truly admire your writing style, I hope you stick around for a time an share your depth with us:)

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 13, 2009

Lol Andrew, it did take some time to master it, however i'm thinking it's not like riding a bicycle lol, ty for your thoughts my friend. :)

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