someone

someone told me the light was gone,
no hopes, no dreams, no rhyme or reason,
only sorrow lingered.

i asked someone to tell me why,
the sky was dark and the fear was thick
only sorrow lingered.

someone told me the joy was gone,
the loneliness crept in, the warmth was out,
only sorrow lingered.

i begged someone to bring it back to me,
the hope, the dreams, the rhyme and reason,
no more sorrows to linger.

someone told me wake up and see,
only you can change your reality,
only happiness lingers.
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Posted: Oct 2009

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Comments (15)

trurorob
nice poem my friend
rob
andrew149
well done ama.....good poem too.....glad you came back to post again .....looking forward to more now......andrew.....xxx
Sunnn
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amahlala
Thanks Andrew, Rob & Sunn...I just posted it, wasn't expecting responses so quickly! LOL
gypsyheart
Excellent poem amahlala - your heart is showing here hug bouquet
amahlala
Not sure if it was my heart or just a general comment on the world..but thank you gypsy!hug
jazzy75
Ama, i like the message here...wonderfully expressed :-)hug
amahlala
Thanks Jazzy...bouquet
poetengineer
really nice to read this sweet honest words ,thanks for u,hope u will post more
amahlala
thank you Poet...was afraid to post for a while...
Redex
Loved this, keep em comingteddybear
boyshchrm6
Truely fluid and inspiring. Lovely amahlala la.
Was worth waiting for. More!cool angel grin applause comfort grin
amahlala
Thanks Redex and Boysh...if I had the capacity to write as much as the others do...wow! everyone has great creativity and passion!
Bentlee
Wow Ama ty for sharing this, what a cool read, taping fingers now waitin for more lol. Good to see you writing my friend ty. :)
amahlala
Hi Bentlee...don't tap those fingers too impatiently...writing is a slooooooow process for me...rolling on the floor laughing
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