whos choice

by Nuwahri61mackay, Queensland, Australia

Nov 2013 559 Views 10 comments

who's choice....

the beat of a heart
reveals your plight
to young to give
to young to fight
do you accept your fate
is it destiny's date
your life a precipice
no need to berate
choices are
sometimes an err
tender your life
wonders to occur
will you or won't you
your mind a maze
how to find your way
through the haze........

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Posted: Nov 2013

About this poem:

life changing decision..............

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Comments (10)

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 21, 2013

Hi, Nuwahri61,
Whether who's choice.... or destiny's date, sometimes circumstance does render life a precipice. Fortunately, one is never too young to be guided by another's love and caring through the haze......... Thanks for sharing.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 21, 2013

beautifully penned piece

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 21, 2013

And sometimes more often than not Nu.

Thanks for the share. Regards to the both of you

SR

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 21, 2013

Wonderful writing Nu

when faced with a difficult decision , or when we are at a crossroads in life , it is indeed difficult to fine a way through the "maze" .
You have described the dilemma so well here in you poem

Best wishes to you and Kathy

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaNov 22, 2013

Hi Joy .........agreeably so thanks for your input regards Nu

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaNov 22, 2013

Hi Darkhorse .....glad you liked it ....thanks for stopping by regards NU

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaNov 22, 2013

Hi Sundayrose........thanks for stopping by and commenting ....much appreciated ...regards Nu an Kathy

Nuwahri61OPmackay, Queensland AustraliaNov 22, 2013

Hi Fiona.........thanks for your kind thoughts and warm regards ....very much appreciated Nu and Kathy

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaNov 22, 2013

It's a tough crossroad to manoeuvre ... One that could change one's future or give another a rightful chance to live...whichever path is chosen...nothing will remain the same.... It's a tough choice alright...