My face is a map That traces, so accurately The journey Of my life Like old roads Carved out of hope Trying to lead somewhere Now tired and worn Always remaining Beyond repair Fading into the past Before the journey Had barely travelled Lightly trodden paths Often fondly remembered For that one single moment When they crossed Each other’s destiny They left such little trace But measured together Provide so many memories Of long lost desires
The ravines of past loves So very deep Etched from sadness As ever growing rifts Drifting further apart Wrenched from pain And scarred with sorrow With impassable rivers Born of tears That had bled From eyes That had seen Futility
But hope Is an emotion Where desires Can see further Than futility For this map Has one last space To be fulfilled And complete The journey of life And when that final river Crosses my face And flows Into nothingness All I will ever know Is it will never Be as deep As yours
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Posted: Dec 2013
About this poem:
At my age this is fairly accurate. I am on a sabbatical from my novel because I need to write some new poetry, not much, but one now and again to refresh my warped mind.
A truly outstanding piece of writing/poetry. This is the first write that I have read after a few months of vacation, and I feel it a great piece. "All I will ever know Is it will never Be as deep As yours."
I find that artistic statement beautiful in so many ways, it exudes a sense of humility that is expertly hidden, even if not intentional by the author. Great to read from you brother.
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"All I will ever know
Is it will never
Be as deep
As yours."
I find that artistic statement beautiful in so many ways, it exudes a sense of humility that is expertly hidden, even if not intentional by the author. Great to read from you brother.
Rob
Rob
Rob x
Rob
I can see that you are well qualified to assess other people's poems.
Rob
The best wines have to be a certain vintage.
Regards Mick.