Knifetooth

Motionless in the prairie grass the Smilodon intently lay.
In the early morning sunshine waiting for its favourite prey.
No movement or heavy breathing as it reclined statuesque.
This carnivore's invisible hunting talent was the very best.

At the water hole a small herd of bison sauntered there.
Carefully inhaling samples of the morning mist and air.
The Sabretooth predator instinctively stayed downwind.
The bisons sipped the water and several sauntered right in.

With lightning speed the statue amazingly came to life!
Several leaps and bounds towards food oh so very rife.
The 400 pound Knifetooth lept like an arrow leading game,
Its frenzied target true and tried with accurate quivered aim.

The great ravenous Sabretooth had became airborne!
The bison scattered like so many black buttons being torn.
The closest bison startled but seem to be entranced,
As if its iris took a final image of the hunter's clever dance.

The bison then turned and bolted but tardiness be judged!
The Sabretooth landed and its fangs would not be budged.
The bison reared in fear and head swirled round in pain,
As if to take one lasting look of its habitat domain.

The sabre tooth grabbed ribs with claws of steel
And took another bite like a trap with huge spring feel.
The bison lost balance and tumbled to the right
As Smilodon went faster now to not prolong its fight.

Tearing fur and cleaving flesh was everywhere in sight.
Mournful awful weeping sounds suggested end of flight.
Spurting blood escaping from veins and ventriculum!
The bison slowly dying becoming increasingly numb.

Furied Flying soil and hair from fangs and claws of steel.
Empty stomach and transfixed mind made it all too real.
The prey melted and all parts finally hugged the ground.
The soon to be carcass then exhaled its... final mournful sound.
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Posted: Feb 2010
About this poem:
In the age of the Sabretooth (Named Smilodon meaning Knifetooth)
It is thought the sabretooth used its stealth to blend in and
waited for game as it was not realy all that agile. Its favourite
food being bison apparently.

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Comments (9)

trurorob
just had a steak have we Larry!!, nice portrayal of the hunt!
rob
luvuluvme2
Boyshchrm, very real. glad I wasn't around then. TY.beer angel
boyshchrm6
I guess I would have been just an
appetizer back then Rob.cool angel cheers
gnj4u
Hi, boyshchrm6, I love your use of opposites...motionless/arrow...statuesque/fangs and claws of steel...lightning speed/400-pound...hunter/dance. I particularly like the line The prey melted and all parts finally hugged the ground in describing the death of the mighty bison...nature at once terrifying and beautiful. Your poem conveys well the hunt, the hunter and hunted...without judgment. Nicely done!
boyshchrm6
Thanks for your comment LL2.
Just before my time too...lol.cool thumbs up angel handshake
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much gnj4u. Thought it time for
something a bit different.cool angel thumbs up
Katfight
I could almost picture David Attenborough reading that out. I loved this poem, bit like a documentary in rhyme. thumbs up
jazzy75
Nightmare inspiring...lol! Descriptive write my friend :)cheering applause
boyshchrm6
Thanks so much Katfight.
Very much appreciate your
comment. Ty angel
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