I demand satisfaction (spouted I to not one ear) I want my maid and my cook and my servant to be here I have been left here all alone and I find it very queer that I must do things for myself, since you've up and disappeared how could you ever dare to leave me after, lo, these many years after all, you were the one I chose to fetch my evening beers I put a roof over your head, gave you children to rear and this is how you repay me, well, thanks a lot my dear though I shouldn't be surprised by your petty, selfish fears our whole sad time together was awash with your tears
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKFeb 21, 2010
It's okay but it's like you are talking about just your happiness and what she can do for you and nothing in return. You miss her because she fetched for you. What about her ?? Just a thought
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKFeb 21, 2010
Well I comment calmly because you never know, it just might not be serious like you say, which I am glad to here. Still nicely written though
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKFeb 21, 2010
When I heard of this poem, before I read it I thought it might well be satire, and gladly it is! I write sometimes a bit near the bone, and truth. I'm glad you met a lovely person to share your life with.
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAFeb 23, 2010
Very entertaining,although at first I wasn't sure if it was your wife or you had gotten all your servants pregnant "gave you children to rear." Who knows these days...lol. Always room for humour although I'd be set to duck some flying shoes!!
hedistuffOPLayopolis, West Virginia USAFeb 23, 2010
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Just a thought
rob
if it was your wife or you had gotten all your
servants pregnant "gave you children to rear."
Who knows these days...lol. Always room for
humour although I'd be set to duck some flying shoes!!
after all, you were the one I chose to fetch my evening beers
Well done hedi.