myth of innocence

It seems like we've grown jaded.
That the past was more better,
more nicer, more innocent,
than things seem today with
all the hungry, and the homeless
the jobless, the angry, the hopeless.

But it is the myth of the now.
Our mothers, grandfathers, and
back beyond reckoning to distant
times, were sad with heartache
that time forgot, that we forget.

We imagine it as friendlier,
more wholesome, good for the soul,
a slow walk down cobbled paths.
A less hurried and harried life.
Watching mother cook fresh eggs.

The dings and blings of youth
today seem incessant and unyielding.
Yesterday's time was chalk hopping
rope jumping, and frog leaping.
But we've always been hungry...

For a simple time when truth
is given quietly and shamelessly
as a good dog comes to it's owner.
And love isn't so distant that
we can't reach out and scratch it.

© agoodguy2have 2010-04-02
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Posted: Apr 2010

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Proudamerican100
Very lovely, time what a glorious subject. applause
BeneathePines
welcomed this, enjoyed, and strangely; needed it.. great work goodguythumbs up
hedistuff
at some point we all have felt this way and pointlessly pointed back at the point of our good old days. it's pointless for the point is that this point is or will be another's good old days. get the point?
Earlgreytea
I so agree with you, the so-called good old days are a useless myth...
mariespoodles
We can choose to focus on what used to be or dread what's around the corner but that wouldn't be living in reality now would it so yes... it is a myth that things were better then...

Yesterday has past, Tomorrow will be the new Now and the Now will be the good old days eventually as already pointed out by mr pointer himself (just to acknowlege you hedistuff) laugh ...

So all we need do is create a Now worth living and have it be the greatest part of our lives.

Thanks... really liked this piece goodguy bouquet cheers
hedistuff
on the other hand, is the memory.
a gentler, warmer, gentile cushion. a welcome resting place for our retreat. I call on it often. it's a large part of all of our's completion. I love it, recalling past......
hedistuff
thanks for all your wonderful poetry...good guy..
hedistuff
oh golly...genteel, I suppose that I'll forever have that "gentile" appearance.
Ladybee42
we only have the words of our parents to go by, and when did we start listening to them?laugh laugh nice thought though goodguy, my family loved to pass on the 'old' stories and we remember them well, like little myths. applause
NeverEndingStory
Well written and great subject teddybear
purpledragonfly
So many times past do I remember that the future can only be!! You have written a brilliant poem here. And so well expressed - took me back again to my lovely childhood times when I was happiest.handshake
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
I especially like the last stanza (including the last line of the 4th). Thanks for sharing your insight.
Mystiflower
lovely n powerful :)hug
trurorob
good write Dave
rob
jazzy75
agoodguy2have - aha! excellent writing and thoughts...was just pondering this the other day...great insights!!peace
caroljoyce
just found this, wonderful. The past or future aleays seem more promising as we cannot live in the present.
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