man! stop it! loved this...good guy, you are a fantastic writer..
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusApr 13, 2010
I loved this Goodguy, beautiful and wonderful advice from the 'guru'... lol, thanks for your work, it is really classy!
NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 13, 2010
Well written poem. Yeah too true it's what we leave behind, whether known or unknown, with loads of helping and giving in between and just being nice ^_^
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandApr 13, 2010
Fantastic world tour,colorful experiences,so beautifully woven,something that can come from a goodguy like you.Enjoyed it so much.
i knew it, anyone can be a guru! very enjoyable - the journey is as important as the destination. great stuff goodguy...
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAApr 13, 2010
GoodGuy, Wonderful poem. One of your best yet. I so enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
ChenoaSWCentral Coast NSW, New South Wales AustraliaApr 14, 2010
Loved where this piece took me...many places in my mind.I also love the feeling of finding one self and making the realisation at the end...yes it is the trail and the tracks we leave behind
Thank you
I also thank you for your time and kind words on my writing
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Journey-as-destination is good. Enjoyed the travels and the rhyme! Thank you for sharing the elevation.
Wonderful poem. One of your best yet. I so enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Loved where this piece took me...many places in my mind.I also love the feeling of finding one self and making the realisation at the end...yes it is the trail and the tracks we leave behind
Thank you
I also thank you for your time and kind words on my writing