fishin lines

by agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia, USA

Apr 2010 537 Views 12 comments

fishin' lines

in morning time i write some lines,
i'm fishin'
at noon, in a nooner, i see some rhymes,
i'm fishin'
when drivin' down the road, pullin' my load,
i'm buildin' a couplet, a stanza, an ode
i'm fishin'
always thinking what to say,
i'm fishin'
can i say it in a better way,
i'm fishin'
wanna be with you tonight, to say it just right,
i'm fishin'
lying in the bed on this moonlit night
i'm fishin'
eyes closed dreamin' of tomorrow sometimes
always thinkin' 'bout poems 'n rhymes
keepin' my mind goin' in cadence with chimes
i'm fishin'

© agoodguy2have 2010-04-26

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Posted: Apr 2010

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Comments (12)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKApr 28, 2010

This one doesn't need one..lol...true to life for some of us, Thankyou......Andrew.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainApr 28, 2010

yes we do think of poems a lot dont we!
rob

Swan87Syria, QatarApr 28, 2010

a very cute poem goodguy

Swan

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAApr 28, 2010

Clever poem agoodguy2have...careful those lines don't get crossed :)

optimisticmeathlone, Westmeath IrelandApr 29, 2010

Hell Guy,, we think in rhyme, all the time, its not a crime, i wanna eat a lime, show me a dime, to pay the mime, hear the clock chime, now I'm stuck, in mud and grime. yep,,I liked that,,,cool write Guy!

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAApr 29, 2010

I read it cause I thought it was actually about fishing, a pastime I truly love. lol You have read enough of my stuff to know I'll write about pretty much anything, so I'm always "thinking in rhymes" too. This explains the mindset quite accurately and eloquently. Good read!

lavinaParadise, IndonesiaApr 29, 2010

An other nice poem ......

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAApr 30, 2010

Hi, agoodguy2have,
always thinkin' 'bout poems 'n rhymes keepin' my mind goin' in cadence with chimes indicates a fishin' success! Thanks for sharing

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMay 1, 2010

Very "Goodguy-like", excellent friend, loved it..., reminds me of my 6 years of live radio, like you, I was 'fishin' 24/7...

purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKMay 3, 2010

I think you've caught something here and could set a trend going ... What with I'm fishing .. and One more thing .... Great stuff agoodguy