Hostages and prisoners

Emotions are jailers of the most sadistic kind for
they show no mercy.
We lie imprisoned and helpless in a bare, dark jail
filled with inexplicable feelings,
where the leftovers from tenderness and desire lie scattered amidst the thick grey dust of unfulfilled daydreams.
These wardens use the hob-nailed heels of their boots to grind hurt deep into the still stinging wounds inflicted by many lost loves.
They randomly throw thin, dry scraps of hope that cannot satisfy even the weakest pang.
Logic sits trapped behind black metal bars
of misguided intuition.
Intelligence is roughly taken hostage and weeps quietly, head bowed.
Sweet reason rests quietly now, subdued by a far greater force.
Faint echoes of laughter from unilateral love
drift in from the back room
where the hostage takers drink whisky and play cards triumphantly, secure in the knowledge that the key is so deeply hidden it cannot easily be found.
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Posted: Apr 2010
About this poem:
Nothing/nobody really has any power to hurt you.The power lies within the emotion you attribute to it.
In search of spiritual detachment.

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Comments (8)

andrew149
Thankyou Caroljoyce, I think that this has been written with a great deal of thought and feeling, brilliant.......Andrew....xxx
gnj4u
Hi, caroljoyce,
Your phrase Logic sits trapped behind black metal bars powerfully captures Emotions are jailers. Although it may not always easily be found, thankfully, there is always a key! Thank you for sharing.
Pabalelo
Wow! A beautiful poem rightly depicting how emotions can be. Thank you Caroljoyce. A lovely poem!
optimisticme
A thoughtfully worded piece, emotions control unless controlled, very very enjoyable read, well done.
caroljoyce
Thanks all above; I write.....before I annihilate.....
hedistuff
ooh...deep thoughts...nice write caroljoyce..
agoodguy2have
they rule us...we rule them...funny how it works. good lines carol
jazzy75
caroljoyce - intriguing write and imagery...i really enjoyed your poemapplause
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