Lord let it rain

Whipping the master rites
still lightning high
unabashed solo
red freedom sky

Tamed by a jaguar
down on the plain
westerly wallow
the fevers engrained

When all thoughts of mercy
in deep foreign soil
ran hard in the corners
the sword and the foil

Served up like soup
the neighbor's disdain
damn with the fallout
Lord let it rain
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Posted: Jun 2023
About this poem:
Spilling out some lines, not entirely sure what its about!

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daradloff
We've had a lot of smoke from Canada these last few weeks. We did have rain today, so it should be safe to light my fireworks without catching the dry grass on fire!cool
Oceanzest
oh yeah, enjoy your big day people, 4th of July.. banana
salamuna
And are those lines yours, ocean? Or was it ChatGPT? Anyway I like how it sounds. Lilyapplause
Yankee4you
Red freedom??? Wow That's a stretch about the color red in today's world.......but who am I to say so? wave
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