REDEX & HEDI STORY part 2

cat's eyes wide at the sight of mousie
ascamper in play outside of the house
'this squeaking dart would make a fine dinner
I'll bide my time, and purr to befriend her'
charade of cool kitty was tenuous at best
unknown, on high watching, was owl in her nest

meanwhile, teathered, on the far side of the yard
big dog was grousing silently, 'this staying put is hard!'
'oh if I could just get free, I'd chase that cat around'
'and if my teeth should catch her, I'd grind her on the ground'

under such pressure, then, dog's rusty tie snapped
surprising himself, plus, woke kitty's catnap
frightening the mouse, who took off in a run
now a startling new chain of events had begun

mouse's trust of cat might prove it's undoing
for quickly behind her, the cat was pursuing
tiny mouselegs pumping, as hard as they could
fearing her end may not end up so good

but dog was now almost on top of the cat
hard pounding in chase, mass slobbering fat
kitty shrieked, then sprinted around the house
yet she was still doggedly, after the mouse

no pace of prominade nor steps of stealth
a scairdy cat now, afraid for it's health
as dog gained on the cat, and cat gained on the mouse
arose noisy whoosh from on high by the house

just when mousie feared to be trapped in cat's paws
an owl lifted mouse off safely within her claws
they perched on a limb, eyes turned to the ground
watching dog chasing cat, around and around

but tweren't a surprise what hoot had done
for they had been fellows when they were young
when out of nest, young owlet plunged
nourished with fluorish from mousie's tongue
and now, 'last allowed to repay for such care'
her wing now protecting friend mouse sitting there

they bubbled and bounced, their laughter out loud
said owl 'that darn cat's no longer so proud'
'struggling to keep reach out of doggy's print paws'
'and safe from the bite of that mean old cur's jaw'
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Posted: Aug 2010
About this poem:
finish this up Red...I'm very, very dizzy..golly!, as I've trod in the footfalls of a dog, a cat, a mouse (wee footsfalls), and shot for the moon on owl's wing. I'm so amix, now never quite sure whether or when I'm a hoot hooting or squeeky scooting or hound howling or meow prowling...

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agoodguy2have
OMG!!! laughed so hard, can't eat my lunch
you critter poets are indeed a strange bunch
i'll wager redex will make it all right
and i'll read a fine end by the end of tonight!
amahlala
popcorn Can't wait for the next part! Great stuff!
Redex
banana peace Just wonderful loved it,yay gonna have to think about this, or if one of our good poets want the ending, or even a carry on??? Just great hedi sorry about name spelling wrong, unforgivsble have righted my wrong. Story did not take you long for chapter two teddybear
hedistuff
or move on to a new tale...maybe something with caroljoyce and a....goat? (just kidding, no letters please)
Redex
thumbs up thumbs up
Ladybee42
rolling on the floor laughing this is great stuff hedi...(ran out of popcorn, off to get another bucket..gotta go
and as for CJ telling tales about the goat affair...turned Tom and Jerry into over 15's viewing! laugh laugh bouquet bouquet
hedistuff
yes...of course, the goat.....stole the old woman's bloomers...no! that was goodguys sheep...I can't keep carol's barnyard imagination sorted...
caroljoyce
I do not have a 'BARNYARD IMAGINATION', it's vivid, admittedly but there is absolutely nothing chicken about it. Who started this lot anyway? I was just trying to help out here.boxing boxing boxing
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