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Last Commented Haiku/Senryu/Tanka Poems (281)

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Yankee4you

Teen Idols (Haiku)

Some out of tune teens
With really bad attitudes
Taking center stage
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
This is reflective of my really 'corny' mood tonight...
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gnj4u

Dark Night

Twenty-four dark years
rain down on Batman’s cave and
bullets cloud summer.


Pandemonium!
Life’s delicate balance lost.
Summer tears stream down.


I am not surprised,
says son's mother, reported.
Summer reign shocks world.
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Posted: Jul 2012
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CarterK

Rain

Gathers, born in clouds,
Mingles, life is short, it flies,
Dies, on window pane.
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
This is a Haiku, one of mine, the only poetry that could motivate me in my school days .... Now, of course that i am a tad older and maybe wiser, i wonder was it anything to do with its length and the amount of syllables in relation to my attention span !! LOL !!
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surprizeme

Peaking thru the Clouds

Jagged hills i climb
Sparing me from the grasped world
Peaking thru the clouds
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
A Haiku poem: A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
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cafetwo2010

Soul pain

Eagle spirits fall to the ground
Dream wings cannot fly
Dark talons pierce the soul
The heart languishes in hells nest
A shrill cry of despair echo's
through life's canyon..
'Oh, how the mighty have fallen..!'
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
about lost fullfillment..
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Unknown

"Endings"

Pale skies blaze!...

As night awakens...

When sunset serenades...


Haiku
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
The beauty of nature...
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Unknown

"THE LOVERS"

Their need a burning desire ....
Raging uncontrolled! ....
Fed by the winds of time ....


Senyra.....
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Falling in love...
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Unknown

Lovers (Senryu)

walking hand in hand
lovers embrace in the rain
welcoming passion
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
Definition of Senryu

1) A Japanese poem similar in structure to haiku, but more concerned with human nature, and is often humorous or satiric -- usually in three lines of seventeen kana.

2) A foreign adaptation of 1, usually written in three lines of 17 syllables or LESS.

Again, unless you are Japanese, have been writing Japanese, or speak fluent Japanese, you will be writing definition #2.

A good structure for beginning senryu poets is:

setting
subject and action (on two lines)
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Unknown

Night of the misty moon

As the wind blows,

hearing her name,

I listen.

In the sakura fields,

"It's tonight",

we noticed.

The radiance shows,

on the

Night of the misty moon.

It's beauty glowing.

Love is forever,

As a diamond

Becomes pure,

A sakura petal

Falls into the pond

we are near.

Quiet, Serenity, Peace,

This is our place

For the night

Of the

Misty moon.
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Posted: Sep 2011
About this poem:
This poem is based on both old Japanese and Chinese philosophy, in which, is why I wrote this and because a couple months ago, the moon was looking misty.

In this poem, is a hint on how to keep balance, stability, Vitality and love for others. For which cannot be seen, is what lies from within.

The night i wrote this poem, I was feeling quite calm, peaceful, tranquil, and at peace with myself and GOD. Writing these types of poems is how I express both my feelings, and the old philosophy of China and Japan.
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Unknown

Fabulous Fall (haiku)

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Chilly breeze blowing
Colored leaves against blue sky
Musky scent of Fall
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Posted: Sep 2011
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