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Last Commented Haiku/Senryu/Tanka Poems (281)

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socrates44online today!

AHA! (5-7-5)

where are my glasses?

aha! at last I found you

sitting on my nose
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Senryu
(A short Japanese style poem, similar to haiku in structure, however, senryu tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryu are often cynical or darkly humorous and satiric while haiku are serious)
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utterlytruthfull

PROLUTION

“In the future,
all parts of the body and brain,”
the professor beamed
at his rapt audience
“will be replaceable.”

“PROMAN will pursue
his ever-adjustable programs
forever.
He will affix to and discard from
his body, as required,
all that is in need of renewal.”

"He will function faultlessly
as per The Blueprint.
‘Imperfect’ man and ‘polluted’ Earth
will at last be done with.”

“Does that mean there’ll be no more
Father Xmas?” a student asked, aghast.
“Sorry,” the professor dourly replied;
“no chimneys likely.”
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Posted: Jan 2022
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Oceanzest

Haiku 5-7-5

cool marble relief
nasturtiums in a vase
passage of the day
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Posted: Jul 2017
About this poem:
ah to walk the cool corridors of elegance in Summer
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Mizzy4

Nature Haiku 5.7.5.

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a bird sang sweetly
despite the city chaos
nature will survive

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a single raindrop
disturbed the glistening pond
then reflections danced

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a sudden shower
the adults ran for shelter
children love puddles

~~~~~
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
Nature.
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yaspark

The Outsider View

Sky pierced by stars
The game of connecting dots
Constellations twinkle

The last bird singing
In the chorus at sunrise
Singing from his heart

The portrait wanted
To move outside the frame
Something new to try

Wrapped in quilt of dreams
From the fog of sub-conscience
Words precipitate

Waves wash away my steps
A blanc page to start over
Leaves swayed by the breeze

The lost outsider
Bumped into the world’s problems
Bruises and scratches
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Posted: Sep 2021
About this poem:
A random mix
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Oceanzest

Morning haiku

Sunrise, ocean waves
a woman walks a small dog
courage for the day

a tree peeling bark
summers come and winters go
little insects watch
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Posted: Aug 2021
About this poem:
staying by the beach
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yaspark

War Haiku - another take

Quiet in trenches
Orders followed, carnage left
Shadows of the dead

In sunflower field
An abandoned violin
Refugees fleeing

Born for the combat
Blasts of gun fire, fierce ambush
Tin soldiers at war
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
Following Ocean’s steps
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salamuna

Oceanzest 5.7.5. Haiku Challenge

First summer rain.
I open and then
I fold up my umbrella.
…………
First one, then another
Leaf trembles
On the apple tree
………
You smile.
Far away the bird takes off
From the slow ice floe
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
the best i could write. I never was goed in haiku
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Oceanzest

Music Haiku

walking in Salzburg
Wolfgang Amadè Mozart
distant violin

an old piano
broken keys and tangled wire
good wine, sweet music
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Posted: Jul 2021
About this poem:
Music Haiku
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yaspark

Ocean’s haiku challenge-2

Lifted by a breeze
Dreams transform into clouds
Sparkling drops return

No air left to breathe
Flowing sky following you
Vacuum for me

Locked in the closet
The skeleton felt confined
Those dirty secrets

The night was dragging
Nightmares kept coming back
Rooster did not care
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Posted: Jun 2021
About this poem:
Another try..
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