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Last Commented Haiku/Senryu/Tanka Poems (281)

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GingerGee

Haiku/Senryu Compilation

Bird Table (Nature) Haiku

Icy lacy frost
blankets Holly bush and tree,
Graces berry feast.


Sky Art (Colour) Haiku

Crimson wisps blood-stain
azure's fading sky to paint
dusk's art at sunset.


Tall Order (Animal) Haiku

Legs all sprawled askew.
Yards of neck enmeshed in thorn.
Delicate giraffe.


Despair (Emotion) Senryu

Anguish, held too long.
Wracking sobs and flowing tears.
Eyes implore. Arms fall.


Today (Open Choice) Senryu

Baby born today.
Text said: "Girl, black hair. All well!"
Could be monkey too.

I Am. (Tanka)

Set me a challenge.
Give me a reason to know
something that I don't.
When I can master it once,
Then I'll show you who I am
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Posted: Apr 2019
About this poem:
Senryu is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer morae (or on) in total. However, senryu tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryu are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious. Unlike haiku, senryu do not include a kireji or verbal caesura (cutting word), and do not generally include a kigo, or seasonal word.

It is often said that both haiku and senryu can be funny, but that if it’s funny, it’s probably senryu. Both haiku and senryu can be about nature, but if it’s about nature, it’s probably a haiku. In addition, both haiku and senryu can be about nature or human nature. Both haiku and senryu can be serious or humorous/satirical. A serious poem about nature is certainly a haiku. And a funny/satirical poem about human nature is certainly a senryu.

Tanka consist of five units (often treated as separate lines when transliterated or translated), usually with the following mora pattern: 5-7-5-7-7.

The 5-7-5 is called the kami-no-ku (“upper phrase”), and the 7-7 is called the shimo-no-ku (“lower phrase”).
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gnj4u

Kiwi Loss

There are fifty dead
Lifeless blossoms tinged dark red
Hearts around world bleed
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Posted: Mar 2019
About this poem:
Written in sympathy for the 50 who were mercilessly gunned down and for their friends, families and fellow New Zealanders who suffer these overwhelming losses. Such terrorist acts are an attack against all who hold peace and each other within loving hearts. May our communities find or construct avenues to reclaim civility and health.
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yaspark

Spring Mix

Worn habits to break
Elevate through sweats and ache
Spring arrived to awake


A drop of sunshine
Is brewing in bubbling brine
Dandelion wine


A school of sardines
Swam in sync into a tin
Sardines of my dreams
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Posted: Apr 2019
About this poem:
Inspired by spring
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OdaMae

THE DIVER

how can i dive
into your ocean -
oyster
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Posted: Feb 2019
About this poem:
world of alice: walrus and the oysters
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EXRED

HAIKU SPRING

Dawn chorus begins

Courtships and squabbles songs cease

Evening regains peace
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Posted: Mar 2019
About this poem:
Natures circle
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socrates44online today!

The Sound Of Silence

the ultimate sound
permeating all others
the sound of silence
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
Simon and Garfunkel's "The Sounds of Silence" was, and remains, my favourite song of all time. I spent many hours listening to it.
Silence is the canvas on which all sounds are painted.

I have tried to capture its essence with this haiku.
I am not sure how others will respond to it but it is deeply personal to me.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0jqn9SKYAgY

Some of their other great hits are shown on the same youtube page.
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OdaMae

a cactus flower

a cactus flower was born into the winter -
even snow flakes could not destruct the beauty
of the white petals between thorns
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Posted: Feb 2019
About this poem:
beauty
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yaspark

Break-up

The words flew away
And silence invaded space
Between you and me.

House feels empty
What we shared burned out
Without fire
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Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
Wintery weather occasionally stirs up sadness
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yaspark

A rowdy ride

So many flashbacks
One more year took a spin
To start new again

Hop on the last train
En route to new adventures
Take a rowdy ride!
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Posted: Dec 2018
About this poem:
Happy New Year to the poetry page folk!
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Yankee4you

Awoken

Towers will fall down
Earth all over will shatter
My heart awakens

Refreshing is love
Sweet as gentle summer rain
Now washes the world

Stand back unafraid
Greatness now is glorious
Love conquers evil

Visions of the future
Dance around inside my head
Wisemen once foretold

The Resurrection
The next coming attraction
Theaters near you

Beware and be warned
The moment is getting close
Closer than you think
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Posted: Jan 2019
About this poem:
Haiku style influenced prophesy of the second coming of Christ. Why not? Watch out Godzilla, here's comes JC !! :)
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