P.O.E.m 2010

I.

Pine scented smoke hangs in winter inversion
Every bough bows low with whitened sparkle
And the sun cleans frost from morning panes
Cups of warmth begin to clink to tabletops
Everyone rustles slowly under snug covers

Only one has risen to prepare for the rest
Now the oven emits scents for hunger pangs

Each slowly garbs for the annual gathering
As the household realizes the rituals arrival
Ready to give and receive the members
Tiptoe to hearth beside a decorated tree
Handing ribboned gratitude to each other

II.

Perhaps the smoke will clear from the debris
Eventually the trucks will come heavy-laden
And dump the unwanted refuse of society
Cascading onto the ground for the wretched
Elves of the dump to pick through for scraps

Of course many will be here to jostle about
Never finding enough to sell for a few coins

Each will recycle what can be found and sold
And humbly ask for food for hungry children
Rarely do they go to sleep with full bellies
To dream of a place where they can grow up
Happy to believe in a god that loves all

III.

Perchance all people will come to realize
Everyone needs to strive to equalize
And sing a song both strong and gentle
Caring for strangers as Samaritan showed
Each has special gifts to be bestowed

Only when our hearts shine with love
Neighbor cares for neighbor, patient of

Everyone’s strengths and weaknesses prone
And welcome all, as one of our own
Realization that parents love every child
The mother celebrates everyone’s birth
Happy, father witnesses our peace on earth

© agoodguy2have 2010-12-17
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Posted: Dec 2010

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Comments (8)

Macduff5
A nice acrostic poem, Goodguy,with plenty of seasonal sentiment. ,cheers
caroljoyce
Complex, with changes of mood. Masterful, well thought out, researched and penned. The first part is very evocative.
CJ
marikia
Peace on Earth is a powerful message, Agoodguy, delivered skilfully and in an acrostic style most unusual. I would never have guessed.Thank you for your instructive poetry. Thinking about trying myself in it.
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have,
While the sun cleans frost from morning panes, your P.o.E.m clears the vision to what's important in life. May the poet's words ring out until it can be said by everyone, "The mother celebrates everyone’s birth Happy, father witnesses our peace on earth."
Fellsman
Hi Good Guy

I missed this over the festive period. Great series of acrostics and an unusual mix of free verse and rhyme. But hey! You have pulled it off - this really works. The content is very thought provoking too.

Regards

Bill
stillframe
nice poem my friend
jazzy75
Clever structure POEm is with a powerful message....thanks to you....the trinity....and PEACE ON EARTH to all.
niah9
Initially the opening took me to the start of the festive time of sharing....a different approach, but oh so much more welcome...unique...loved it agoodguy2have....
Niah.teddybear bouquet
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