by boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario, Canada
Feb 2011 957 Views 33 comments
Valentine
Be mine............................................................V'lntine
Please be mine.............................................A Crimson stein
Wont you be my Valentine.................... I don't want a Frankenstein
I will ask until I'm finally blind............thoughts of you within my mind
Wont you be my main Squeeze..Wont you if I ask you double please
You know I dont want a tease. Ill even give you some pink cheese
Won't you kiss me now geez. I wont give you a deadly disease
I promise that it will please me at least if you don't sneeze
Won't you be my Idle Vine, a kind of strawberry wine
If you would that would be so possitively fine
I'll even give to you an elegant dine
Flowers as my constant sign
Be my Crimson Baby
Yes not maybe
Won't you
Huh!
Won't you be my Idle Vine
Please be mine.............................................A Crimson stein
Wont you be my Valentine.................... I don't want a Frankenstein
I will ask until I'm finally blind............thoughts of you within my mind
Wont you be my main Squeeze..Wont you if I ask you double please
You know I dont want a tease. Ill even give you some pink cheese
Won't you kiss me now geez. I wont give you a deadly disease
I promise that it will please me at least if you don't sneeze
Won't you be my Idle Vine, a kind of strawberry wine
If you would that would be so possitively fine
I'll even give to you an elegant dine
Flowers as my constant sign
Be my Crimson Baby
Yes not maybe
Won't you
Huh!
Won't you be my Idle Vine
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Posted: Feb 2011
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Comments (33)
rob
is worth a thousand words....lol.
for a bottle of good wine.
Sweet write.
I like the heart shape, too ...
Thanks.
some pink cheese and strawberry wine.
That is a super and original layout, you will win a few hearts with that. As young Jeddah in Singapore is wont to say: KUDOS
Cheers
Bill
some strawberry wine...It makes all the
friggin' about worthwhile....lol. TY
and then's there's that matter of me already in a relationship
But wonderful, romantic valentine heart poem!
Is it not your birthday or close? If so Happy Birthday
Thanks for the input though. You get strawberry wine and pink
cheese too. I have white chedhar with strawberries or cherries
mixed in....really...would I lie to you.
and appreciate the well wishes and comment.
there are so many of them. Thanks heaps. You get
wine and cheese too!
back at you. As for the image...I think it was
the wine...lol.
Thought some of the sentiments very amusing, just the off the wall humour I like.
Glad you liked it. A bit of silly humour...but with
the right sentiment.
brilliant
your poetic figure smells cheesy. No?
was going Virol...that was just the mold on the
pink cheese...lol.
Oh yah...you get wine and old pink cheese to.
C+ for the shape
D for the texts
(am I cruel? )
wait-----! and I'll give....
A++ for 'the writer'
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mmm.....I think am good at telling lies....