Water

by amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota, USA

Aug 2009 717 Views 25 comments

Water

In the pool upon my back....floating....
Looking upon the stars....shining...twinkling...
In tune with me.
Feeling the water envelope me..
Like a lover's embrace...
The warmth of the water...the cool breeze...
Just caressing me.
Calm comes over me...the stress drains away...
What was unknown...becomes known...
And my sould, again, is free.

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Posted: Aug 2009

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BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 26, 2009

:) it does that to the soul, wonder why:)

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 26, 2009

Sadly, I don't know.....

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 26, 2009

I wondered if it's something to do with our first 9 months:)

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 26, 2009

Interesting idea...I will have to research it.

nikkoleRecife, Pernambuco BrazilAug 26, 2009

Wonderful poem!!!
Tomorrow, my dear friend am in participation Anthologic of thema:Ecologic
Before I worked and wrote in organization of one ONLY about thema WATER.
Love all about water.
To me, meet this poem your, is a gift of my day.
Thanks for to share
Greetings from Brazil.
Nik

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 26, 2009

Thank you!

poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 28, 2009

beautiful express for a moment u live it , thanks for ur share

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 28, 2009

Thanks, I appreciate your input.

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 28, 2009

Is there a next on the horizon:) huh is there:) :)

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 28, 2009

A next water poem....?

QuietStormFSouthern Ontario, Ontario CanadaAug 29, 2009

Someone who feels about the water as I do.. Lovely Ama.

shhoresHYDERABAD, Telangana IndiaAug 30, 2009

its water for me always pure magic TY

amahlala

shhoresHYDERABAD, Telangana IndiaAug 30, 2009

i am sorry i commented

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 31, 2009

Congrats my friend on your works, ur getting some great reviews:) happy to see you taking the plunge:)

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 31, 2009

thank you...you are a great cheerleader and friend!
And the play on words is splashingly fun!

fareawayhyderabad, Telangana IndiaSep 16, 2009

reading this released me just now thankyou!

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 16, 2009

Such a nice poem amahlala-i can relate to that water experience-does the same to me.Thanks for sharing

sshoreHyderabad, Telangana IndiaOct 8, 2009

love this one water all the way..deep waters!!
thankyou for sharing

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAOct 8, 2009

amahlala - lovely poem :-)

jerseygirl49Petersburg, Virginia USANov 13, 2009

I like the comparison between the water ,and a lovers embrace. That could surley have a way of relaxing you.Nice poem..thanx...JG

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 13, 2009

Thank you...water is a living giving thing to me....

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaNov 13, 2009

Very calming and relaxing amahlala.
Very nice phrasing. I like it!

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 13, 2009

Glad you liked it Boysh!

BarrellofartGrand Rapids, Michigan USANov 13, 2009

Very nice, thank you.

amahlalaOPAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 13, 2009

Thanks B! Appreciate it

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