in love

when we feel it
should we reveal it?
is it safe to say?

if we know it
must we show it?
would it really be okay?

can we see it?
and can we be it
without driving it away?

have we been there?
that warm place where
a moment lasts as though a day

are our hearts loudly beating?
are our bodies quickly heating
til all our instincts won't obey?

are we gaining responsiveness?
a lapsing state of consciousness
loosing our spirits, come what may
...
...
it's my advice
to never think twice
just let our emotions be free

the meaning
of our leaning
to how wonderful it could be

as two together
be fair or foul weather
just so long as we are we

far past the twelvth of never
our love shall ring out forever
our sighs of content where all may see

that we are as one
it's only begun
we shall use eternity

to sing out our wondrous love
under starry skies above
for I love you...and you love me
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2011
About this poem:
I don't know. I was so lucky to meet my wife Lyn on this site. I really love and appreciate the fine people here...and I love the originality and quality of your compositions.

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Comments (17)

elo777
elo..applause applause applause
agoodguy2have
hedi, your piece/peace has a real quality of cadence to it. to wit: it rolls it grooves it really moves. love for two. ;-)
kickit22
this was a real pleasure too read hedi thank you.. kickit
purpledragonfly
ONE FINE PIECE OF POETRY THIS IS HEDI. A GREAT READ. THANKS.:purple: cheers
hedistuff
thank you for reading..
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
is it safe to say?... Who can be "safe" when love rests on the lips? Nothing ventured, nothing gained...leaning to how wonderful it could be...
thelmatalla
You must be really in love to be writing such beautiful poetry!!bouquet bouquet bouquet
country_lady67
Hedi.. very beautiful heart wings
boyshchrm6
Great exspression of your feelings Heidi and hope
for others. If you are happy and you know it...clap your hands..lol.thumbs up angel cool cheers
Xmonaco
Geeez !! with who are you in love ? beautiful peace
Earlgreytea
[as two together be fair or foul weather just so long as we are we]


very nice write, i think this is a big key in relationship, thanks for sharing Hedi...
jazzy75
Ahh...a write filled with promise and love hedi! wine Thank you for sharing your giftgift
Macduff5
Great poem Hedi...it's the thing that keeps going...and without being cliched...there's nothing on this Earth that's going to surpass it. cheers
Poetnumber1
this is incredible stuff manyay yay yay yay yay yay yay banana banana banana banana banana
Poetnumber1
this is incredible stuff manyay yay yay yay yay yay yay banana banana banana banana banana
marikia
"Wondrous love under starry skies" ... what a bliss! Hold tight to your love. I am happy for you both. God bless you! bouquet bouquet bouquet
lifesajoy
Who's he in love with? It better be me! lol
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